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My edited version:
The average individual’s cost of going into space is estimated at a fraction of the price per economy ticket of transatlantic airplane travel by the end of the 21st century.(A) The average individual’s cost of going into space is estim
ated at a fraction of the price per economy ticket of transatlantic airplane travel by the end of
the 21st century.
(B) The average individual’s cost by the end of the 21st century of going into
space is estimated at a fraction of the price per economy ticket of transatlantic
airplane travel.
(C) By the end of the 21st century, the average individual’s cost of going into
space is estimated to be a fraction of the price per economy ticket of transatlantic
airplane travel.
(D) To go into space, the cost to the average individual is estimated to be a fraction
of the price per economy ticket of transatlantic airplane travel by the end of
the 21st century.
(E) It is estimated that by the end of the 21st century the cost to the average
individual of going into space will be a fraction of the current price per economy
ticket of transatlantic airplane travel.
If E is the answer for the original topic under issue, then it should be the correct answer for the altered example too, since there is no difference between them. Therefore, you are on the dot.
However, in the other two choices, namely C and D, my point was to highlight the problem in meaning. Please note that the intent of the passage is to compare the anticipated future cost of space travel to the current price of the transatlantic travel. It is not a comparison between the cost of the both the two listed travels in the future time namely by the end of 21st century. The transatlantic cost is of today and that is why E is correct. That is the crux.
(C) By the end of the 21st century, the average individual’s cost of going into space is estimated to be a fraction of the price per economy ticket of transatlantic airplane travel.
Your reason: C has "the average individual’s cost". The use of possessive is problematic. - Of course, you mean the cost of the individual going into space' is perhaps better.
My reason: You see, the introductory modifier "By the end of the 21st century" stands for both the travel costs at the end of 21st century. The function of an introductory modifier is to modify the entire events that follow. That is substantively different from the original intent. That is why this wrong logically.
(D) To go into space, the cost to the average individual is estimated to be a fraction of the price per economy ticket of transatlantic airplane travel by the end of the 21st century.
Your reason for D: has "To go into space, the cost to the average individual", which, I think, violates infinitive of purpose.
My reason: 1. in this choice, the future cost trans - Atlantic travel that is by the end of the 21st century is wrongfully compared with the probable future cost of the space trip. Why is this wrong? Because you cannot compare between an unknown space cost with a yet another unknown cost.
2. Dictionally, the average cost of travel is substantively different from the cost to the average individual. This is also a change in meaning.
Am I right?