Hi
Mechmeera,
I apology in advance if i still keep asking too much since I am not satisfied.
I still think that " their" refers to A while " they " refers to B faced pronoun error.
However, I remember a real GMAT question which was explained by an Manhantan expert :
To meet the rapidly rising market demand for fish and seafood, suppliers are growing fish twice as fast as
their natural growth rate, cutting their feed allotment by nearly half and raising them on special diets
A) their natural growth rate, cutting their feed allotment
B) their natural growth rate, their feed allotment cut
C) growing them naturally, cutting their feed allotment
D) they grow naturally, cutting their feed allotment
E) they grow naturally, with their feed allotment cut
Question : one question.. are the pronoun they and thier are correctly refering to thier antecedent. i am confused beacause 'They', is close to 'suppliers' so, it may refer to supplier.
please clarify
Replied by Ron : this is a good point -- the correct answer to this problem, yet again, contains a pronoun that is technically ambiguous.
however, as we've seen again and again and again and again, not all ambiguous pronouns are incorrect!
so here's the simplest way of making the decision:
1) if you see an AMBIGUOUS PRONOUN that is REPLACED BY THE CORRECT NOUN in OTHER ANSWER CHOICES, then ELIMINATE the ambiguous pronoun and keep the specific noun.
for an example, see problem 68 in the blue verbal supplement, in which "them" is split against "these companies".
HOWEVER,
2) if you see an ambiguous pronoun that is NOT replaced by the correct noun in any of the other answer choices, then DON'T eliminate!for an example, see problem 21 in the blue verbal supplement (in which the correct answer contains a technically ambiguous pronoun).
or see the problem in this thread!
So I think this problem faced the same issue. Before we check for pronoun ( with no options with the correct ), we check for other errors first. So "serve as or as " is correct idiom then A, B, E out. D changes meaning that is why C is correct. Kind of the best of the worst options . How do you think abou that?