OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Day 207: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
The great advantage of using plutonium rather than U-235 in the manufacture of weapons is plutonium is able to be chemically separated from uranium, since it is a different atom with entirely different chemical properties.
Quote:
A) The great advantage of using plutonium rather than U-235 in the manufacture of weapons is [that] plutonium is able to be chemically separated from uranium, since it is a different atom with entirely different chemical properties.
• the word "that" is missing. ("that" stands for "the fact that")
•
is able to be is long-winded. "Can be" works just fine.
• the antecedent of
it is fairly clear from the structure and context of the sentence.
That antecedent is plutonium. I never eliminate on the basis of pronoun ambiguity on the first pass. But the absence of "that" is fatal.
Eliminate A
Quote:
B) The great advantage of using plutonium rather than U-235 in the manufacture of weapons is that plutonium is able to be separated chemically from uranium, being as it is a different atom with entirely different chemical properties.
•
is able to be has the same problems as exist in option A
•
being as does not mean
because or
since. In some regions of spoken English, "being as" is used to mean "because." GMAC does not accept this construction.
Eliminate B
Quote:
C) The great advantage of using plutonium rather than U-235 in the manufacture of weapons is plutonium’s and uranium’s ability to be separated chemically from each other, since the former is a different atom with entirely different chemical properties.
• distorted or incorrect meaning.
This option does not say that plutonium is better (the great advantage) than uranium is—only that the two elements can separate from each other.
• the antecedent of
former seems to be
plutonium's ability, but
plutonium's ability is not a "different atom with entirely different chemical properties."
This option makes no sense.
Eliminate C
Quote:
D) The great advantage of using plutonium rather than U-235 in the manufacture of weapons is that plutonium can be chemically separated from uranium, since it is a different atom with entirely different chemical properties.
• the awkward and long-winded phrase
is able to be is nicely shortened to
can be• the sentence is intelligible: unlike the uranium isotope U-235, plutonium is easily separated from uranium
• the antecedent of
it is unclear. In fact, we arguably have true pronoun ambiguity on our hands because
it could refer to either of the two elements.
But -- on the first pass, do not reject an option solely on the basis of pronoun ambiguity.
(I don't think that this instance is unclear. The highlight of the sentence is plutonium. But that "it" is not ideal.)
KEEP, tentatively
Quote:
E) The great advantage of using plutonium rather than U-235 in the manufacture of weapons is [that] plutonium and uranium can be separated chemically from each other and that plutonium is a different atom with entirely different chemical properties.
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• as in option A, the word
that is missing
• "
The great advantage" is only
one advantage. This option contains two advantages. Not logical.
Eliminate E
Hmm. No perfect answer exists.
But option D is clear, concise, and only a little bit vague.
Option D is better than the others.
By process of elimination, the best answer is D.COMMENTStrigradius , welcome to SC Butler.
(Great username. Math? Gamer? Both? Probably the latter.)
These answers are all very good.
You're all picking up on subtleties; your "intuition" about both the language and this test is very good and getting better. Kudos.