The human growth hormone, made by the pituitary gland, is secreted dur

Question

The human growth hormone, made by the pituitary gland, is secreted  during sleep in higher concentrations than when awake .

(A) during sleep in higher concentrations than when awake
(B) when sleeping in higher concentrations than waking hours
(C) in higher concentrations during sleeping than waking
(D) in higher concentrations during sleep than during waking hours
(E) in higher concentrations when asleep than when awake

KyleWiddison · Accepted Answer

Both "asleep" and "awake" are adjectives, so they have to modify a noun and the only noun is the hormone. This means that the hormones sleep which is illogical.

On the other hand, "sleep" and "waking hours" are nouns and stand on their own. In this sentence the hormones are not doing the sleeping.

KW

TommyWallach · Answer

Hey All,

Lots of good discussion here, and I think the right answer was explained here and there in pieces. I thought I'd take a stab at putting it all together in one place.

The human growth hormone, made by the pituitary gland, is secreted during sleep in higher concentrations than when awake.

(A) during sleep in higher concentrations than when awake
PROBLEM: "When" is a relative pronoun, meaning it's a modifier, meaning it has to modify something. Relative pronouns always modify nouns, but there is no adequate noun. Who is "awake" in the phrase, "when awake" (something has to be).

(B) when sleeping in higher concentrations than waking hours
PROBLEM: Again, who's sleeping?

(C) in higher concentrations during sleeping than waking
PROBLEM: This sounds like the comparison is between time spent asleep and time spent WAKING UP. The comparison should be between being asleep and being awake.

(D) in higher concentrations during sleep than during waking hours
ANSWER: Gets rid of "When" and compares the right two things.

(E) in higher concentrations when asleep than when awake 
PROBLEM: Two "Whens" = double the trouble.

Hope that helps!

-tommy

vshaunak@gmail.com · Answer

'D' is the best.

(A) during sleep in higher concentrations than when awake  **incorrect usage of when. Harmones does not awake**** 
(B) when sleeping in higher concentrations than waking hours  **same as in A*** 
(C) in higher concentrations during sleeping than waking  ***'during sleeping is compared to 'waking'***** 
(D) in higher concentrations during sleep than during waking hours  ****CORRECT*** 
(E) in higher concentrations when asleep than when awake  ****Same as in 'A'***

kostyan5 · Answer

D is correct.

E may imply that the hormone itself is asleep or awake.

miaojunmaggie · Answer

but why cannot D mean that it is secreted during the hormone's sleep rather than its waking hours? I mean, is there rule that explain the difference between using D and E?

Basim2016 · Answer

Hi gmatninja,

One small query wrt Choice E: Is the Comparison right in terms of singular/plural, as SLEEP looks to be singular and WAKING HOURS is plural.

Please CLARIFY,

Regards.

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ChiranjeevSingh · Answer

Here's the   official explanation   provided by the GMAC for this question:

The sentence describes a difference between being asleep and being awake with respect to secretion of the human growth hormone which is secreted in higher concentrations during sleep. The word  than  is correctly used to make the comparison, except that the phrases  during sleep  and  when awake  are not parallel as required. The phrase  during sleep  is an adverbial modifier of the verb  is secreted,  but the phrase  when awake  is an elliptical clause;  when     awake , where “person X” should refer to something that could be awake (we know something refers to a person because the sentence is about the  human  growth hormone). Therefore, the lack of reference to a person indicates that  when awake  is incorrect in this context.

Option A:  This is incorrect for the reasons given above.

Option B:  The sentence contains no reference to a person to whom the verbal adjective  sleeping  can appropriately apply. The adverbial phrase  in higher concentrations  should precede  sleeping  to avoid a reading that seems odd, given that sleeping does not come in varying concentrations. Also, the placement of the phrase immediately before  than  seems to absurdly compare  concentrations  with  waking hours.  Alternatively, but equally absurd, the sentence could be read as comparing  the human growth hormone  with  waking hours .

Option C:  There is a failure of parallelism in that  during  is needed in the second part of the comparison as well as in the first. Also, the noun  sleep  would be preferable to the verb-derived noun form  sleeping  following  during  (this consideration also makes  waking,  the form parallel to  sleeping , less suitable).

Option D:  Correct. The phrases  during sleep  and  during waking hours  are parallel as required for comparisons that use  than .

Option E:  Although  when asleep  is parallel with  when awake , there is no reference to a person to whom the adjectives  asleep  and  awake  can apply. This wording absurdly seems to attribute these adjectives to the human growth hormone itself.

The correct answer is D.

Please note that I'm not the author of this explanation. I'm just posting it here since I believe it can help the community.

Keshav1404 · Answer

Hi Experts,

I was able to eliminate the two options A,B. But I got confused with the parallelism part.
Option C, looks like there is comparison is between the gerunds.
However Option E, looks like the comparison is between nouns.

How parallelism worked in Option D? please explain.

Thanks in Advance.

DmitryFarber · Answer

Keshav1404

We don't need the same word forms after "during" as long as we have phrases that can be parallel. "During sleep" and "during waking hours" are both adverbial modifiers that describe when something happens, so they are parallel.

C is comparing "during sleeping" with just "waking." Those aren't parallel. We need the second "during" to show that we are comparing when something happens, not the states themselves. (In other words, we don't want to compare nouns, and that's what gerunds are.)

E isn't comparing nouns; it's comparing adverbial modifiers: "when asleep" and "when awake." It's fine to make these parallel; however, they don't make sense in the sentence. No person/animal is mentioned, so there's no one for "when asleep" to describe.

Keshav1404 · Answer

DmitryFarber 
But in option C, Why 'During' cannot be applied to both Sleeping and Waking?

DmitryFarber · Answer

Because we're in the middle of a comparison: HIGHER (during sleeping) THAN . . . . We need "during waking" for this to work. HIGHER/THAN creates a pair of closed parallel markers. These typically require us to be very strict with parallelism to make the structure make sense. For instance, I can't say "I'm more creative at home than school."

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