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The most widely known images of Yosemite National Park are those made by photographer Ansel Adams, who photographed it continually from his teenage years on.
(A) who photographed it continually from his teenage years on
(B) who photographed it starting from his teenage years and then continually
(C) who photographed it starting in his teenage years and continually from then on
(D) having photographed it continually since his teenage years
(E) having photographed it starting in his teenage years and then continually
Meaning is crucial to solving this problem:Understanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended meaning of this sentence is that the most widely known images of Yosemite National Park are those made by the photographer Ansel Adams, and Ansel Adams photographed it continually from his teenage years on.
Concepts tested here: Meaning + Modifiers + Awkwardness/RedundancyA: Correct. This answer choice modifies "Ansel Adams" with "who photographed it...years on", conveying the intended meaning - that the most widely known images of Yosemite National Park are those made by the photographer Ansel Adams, and
as a separate action Ansel Adams photographed it continually from his teenage years on. Further, Option A is free of any awkwardness or redundancy.
B: This answer choice uses the needlessly wordy phrase "starting from his teenage years and then continually", leading to awkwardness and redundancy.
C: This answer choice uses the needlessly wordy phrase "starting in his teenage years and continually from then on", leading to awkwardness and redundancy.
D: This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "having photographed it continually"; the use of the "comma + present participle ("verb+ing" - "having" in this sentence) incorrectly implies that most widely known images of Yosemite National Park are those made by photographer Ansel Adams
because he photographed it continually from his teenage years on; the intended meaning is that the most widely known images of Yosemite National Park are those made by the photographer Ansel Adams, and
as a separate action Ansel Adams photographed it continually from his teenage years on; please remember, the introduction of the present participle ("verb+ing"- “opening” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship.
E: This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "having photographed it starting"; the use of the "comma + present participle ("verb+ing" - "having" in this sentence) incorrectly implies that most widely known images of Yosemite National Park are those made by photographer Ansel Adams
because he photographed it continually from his teenage years on; the intended meaning is that the most widely known images of Yosemite National Park are those made by the photographer Ansel Adams, and
as a separate action Ansel Adams photographed it continually from his teenage years on; please remember, the introduction of the present participle ("verb+ing"- “having” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship. Further, Option E uses the needlessly wordy phrase "starting in his teenage years and then continually", leading to awkwardness and redundancy.
Hence, A is the best answer choice.Additional Note: Some students may believe that Options B and C are incorrect due to a supposed lack of parallelism between the present participle "starting" and the adverb "continually"; however, this is not the case. In these answer choices, "starting" plays the role of an adverb acting upon the verb "photographed", just as "continually" does. To understand this concept, please consider this example "John jogs every day, starting from his house and continuing for five miles."
To understand the concept of "Comma plus Present Participle for Cause-Effect relationship" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~3 minutes):
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