Last visit was: 11 Dec 2024, 07:36 It is currently 11 Dec 2024, 07:36
Close
GMAT Club Daily Prep
Thank you for using the timer - this advanced tool can estimate your performance and suggest more practice questions. We have subscribed you to Daily Prep Questions via email.

Customized
for You

we will pick new questions that match your level based on your Timer History

Track
Your Progress

every week, we’ll send you an estimated GMAT score based on your performance

Practice
Pays

we will pick new questions that match your level based on your Timer History
Not interested in getting valuable practice questions and articles delivered to your email? No problem, unsubscribe here.
Close
Request Expert Reply
Confirm Cancel
User avatar
nitin6305
Joined: 09 Nov 2012
Last visit: 22 Jan 2017
Posts: 73
Own Kudos:
429
 [4]
Given Kudos: 174
Status:How easy it is?
Location: India
Concentration: Operations, General Management
GMAT 1: 650 Q50 V27
GMAT 2: 710 Q49 V37
GPA: 3.5
WE:Operations (Other)
Products:
GMAT 2: 710 Q49 V37
Posts: 73
Kudos: 429
 [4]
Kudos
Add Kudos
4
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
User avatar
carcass
User avatar
Board of Directors
Joined: 01 Sep 2010
Last visit: 10 Dec 2024
Posts: 4,603
Own Kudos:
34,744
 [1]
Given Kudos: 4,676
Posts: 4,603
Kudos: 34,744
 [1]
1
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
avatar
govols
Joined: 06 Dec 2012
Last visit: 07 Jun 2013
Posts: 17
Own Kudos:
10
 [1]
Location: United States
Concentration: Marketing, International Business
GMAT 1: 750 Q45 V49
GPA: 3.92
WE:Education (Non-Profit and Government)
GMAT 1: 750 Q45 V49
Posts: 17
Kudos: 10
 [1]
1
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
avatar
btsang87
Joined: 22 Dec 2012
Last visit: 21 Feb 2013
Posts: 1
Own Kudos:
3
 [3]
Posts: 1
Kudos: 3
 [3]
3
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
I picked A because all of the other choices contained him, which does not have a direct antecedent because its Joe's little sister which is not a noun but an adjective. But I did think A was wrong as well.
User avatar
alexol
Joined: 23 Jul 2012
Last visit: 14 Apr 2013
Posts: 8
Own Kudos:
17
 [1]
Given Kudos: 5
Posts: 8
Kudos: 17
 [1]
1
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
The newly released 3D Disney movie was supposed to be the best of all time and Joe’s little sister begged for taking her to see it

A) begged for taking
B) cried and begged him to take
C) pestered him greatly for taking
D) persistently begged him to take
E) insisted him taking

Source: GMAT club grammar club

I get the point that we need to add "him" to make sense but I thought adding "persistently" would result in bringing external information. Could you tell me if I'm wrong?

Thanks
User avatar
commdiver
Joined: 09 Nov 2012
Last visit: 07 Mar 2016
Posts: 153
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 29
GMAT 1: 700 Q43 V42
GMAT 1: 700 Q43 V42
Posts: 153
Kudos: 202
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
D

A is incorrect because the sentence does not specify who is being begged.

B is incorrect because it is wordy.

C is incorrect because it is implying that Joe's sister pestered him because he took her. That is not what the sentence is trying to say.

E is incorrect because it is grammatically incorrect. One would gave to say "insisted that he take her."
User avatar
alexol
Joined: 23 Jul 2012
Last visit: 14 Apr 2013
Posts: 8
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 5
Posts: 8
Kudos: 17
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
commdiver
D

A is incorrect because the sentence does not specify who is being begged.

B is incorrect because it is wordy.

C is incorrect because it is implying that Joe's sister pestered him because he took her. That is not what the sentence is trying to say.

E is incorrect because it is grammatically incorrect. One would gave to say "insisted that he take her."

Thank you. :)
But I still don't understand why we choose answer D. Using "persistently" changes the meaning because the girl is "begging", she's not "persistently begging" right? :?:
Maybe bringing external information is something that can be done in answering sentence correction questions on the GMAT and that I don't know yet? (I've just started to review SC questions)
User avatar
commdiver
Joined: 09 Nov 2012
Last visit: 07 Mar 2016
Posts: 153
Own Kudos:
202
 [1]
Given Kudos: 29
GMAT 1: 700 Q43 V42
GMAT 1: 700 Q43 V42
Posts: 153
Kudos: 202
 [1]
1
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
I honestly do not like this question. Both answer choices B and D seem correct. I chose E because B seems a bit more wordy. Yes, D does add new information, but it does not change the meaning of the sentence. I am not sure which level of difficulty this question is supposed to be at, but once you get to the 700+ level, the sentences are almost entirely about meaning.

I hope that helps :)
User avatar
Practicegmat
Joined: 24 Aug 2011
Last visit: 16 Dec 2014
Posts: 94
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 166
Status:Time to apply!
Location: India
Concentration: Finance, Entrepreneurship
GMAT 1: 600 Q48 V25
GMAT 2: 660 Q50 V29
GMAT 3: 690 Q49 V34
GPA: 3.2
WE:Engineering (Computer Software)
GMAT 3: 690 Q49 V34
Posts: 94
Kudos: 477
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
I don't accept any options given to be the correct answer :

For (d) , " Joe’s little sister persistently begged him to take "

But as per my knowledge of grammar rules, you can't use a possessive noun ( here Joe's ) as the referent for a pronoun ( here him).

Hence the correct option would have been " " Joe’s little sister persistently begged Joe to take "

Other options also has the same issue and (A) is awkward.

Please let me know all of your say on this
User avatar
alexol
Joined: 23 Jul 2012
Last visit: 14 Apr 2013
Posts: 8
Own Kudos:
17
 [1]
Given Kudos: 5
Posts: 8
Kudos: 17
 [1]
1
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
Thank you guys for helping.
Well we seem to agree that the answers are awkward, so I think I will forget about it and move on :-D
User avatar
PiyushK
Joined: 22 Mar 2013
Last visit: 19 May 2023
Posts: 603
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 235
Status:Everyone is a leader. Just stop listening to others.
Location: India
GPA: 3.51
WE:Information Technology (Computer Software)
Products:
Posts: 603
Kudos: 4,748
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
What is the source of this awkward question, Its a poor quality question overall.
User avatar
Paris75
Joined: 26 Aug 2013
Last visit: 22 Jul 2024
Posts: 129
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 401
Status:Student
Location: France
Concentration: Finance, General Management
Schools: EMLYON FT'16
GMAT 1: 650 Q47 V32
GPA: 3.44
Schools: EMLYON FT'16
GMAT 1: 650 Q47 V32
Posts: 129
Kudos: 135
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
PiyushK
What is the source of this awkward question, Its a poor quality question overall.

I admit! Poor quality question.

But the meaning makes it simple to find the answer.. X wants him to take her...

It is not an official GMAT question...
User avatar
whitehalo
Joined: 21 Jul 2013
Last visit: 14 Oct 2018
Posts: 98
Own Kudos:
81
 [2]
Given Kudos: 142
WE:Securities Sales and Trading (Commercial Banking)
Posts: 98
Kudos: 81
 [2]
2
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
hi papahiroshi, I would not have picked B because in the original sentence, there was no indication that the little sister actually cried, just begged. The rest of the answer choices are variations and synonyms of 'begged'.
User avatar
arunavamunshi1988
Joined: 22 Mar 2014
Last visit: 10 Jul 2018
Posts: 76
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 136
Location: United States
Concentration: Finance, Operations
GMAT 1: 530 Q45 V20
GPA: 3.91
WE:Information Technology (Computer Software)
GMAT 1: 530 Q45 V20
Posts: 76
Kudos: 40
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
I think, the question is incorrect. in correct option D, 'him' does not have correct antecedent as in GMAT possesive nouns (in this case 'Joe's') can not be an antecedent of pronouns.
User avatar
amulya619
Joined: 06 Jul 2016
Last visit: 02 Jul 2021
Posts: 36
Own Kudos:
Given Kudos: 2
Location: India
Concentration: Operations, General Management
GMAT 1: 610 Q49 V25
WE:General Management (Energy)
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
D cannot be the answer in any case....him has no antecedent.
User avatar
VerbalBot
User avatar
Non-Human User
Joined: 01 Oct 2013
Last visit: 04 Jan 2021
Posts: 17,992
Own Kudos:
Posts: 17,992
Kudos: 902
Kudos
Add Kudos
Bookmarks
Bookmark this Post
Hello from the GMAT Club VerbalBot!

Thanks to another GMAT Club member, I have just discovered this valuable topic, yet it had no discussion for over a year. I am now bumping it up - doing my job. I think you may find it valuable (esp those replies with Kudos).

Want to see all other topics I dig out? Follow me (click follow button on profile). You will receive a summary of all topics I bump in your profile area as well as via email.

This Question is Locked Due to Poor Quality
Hi there,
The question you've reached has been archived due to not meeting our community quality standards. No more replies are possible here.
Looking for better-quality questions? Check out the 'Similar Questions' block below for a list of similar but high-quality questions.
Want to join other relevant Problem Solving discussions? Visit our Sentence Correction (EA only) Forum for the most recent and top-quality discussions.
Thank you for understanding, and happy exploring!
Moderators:
GMAT Club Verbal Expert
7153 posts
GMAT Club Verbal Expert
234 posts