Must mention, I myself have disconnects between B & C, chosen C for below reasons. Please do advice if you feel below needs correction, will be helpful to me.
A. a business term describing an information barrier within an organization, either a for profit or nonprofit one, which is also known as a screen or firewall, is used to prevent exchanges or communication that could lead to conflicts of interest, which safeguards
1). modifier " screen or firewall refers to Chinese wall that' but phrase is not appropriately placed and hence seems incorrectly modify previous sentence. 2). I also think either a for profit or "a" nonprofit one should have been a correct structure, please do correct me if wrong. 3). which safeguards happens to refer to conflict of interest which is again incorrect as it stands for CW.B. a business term describing an information barrier within an organization, either a for profit or nonprofit one, also known as a screen or firewall, used to prevent exchanges or communication that could lead to conflicts of interest, thereby safeguarding
- I also think either a for profit or "a" nonprofit one should have been a correct structure, please do correct me if wrong. C. known also as a screen or firewall, is a business term that describes an information barrier within an organization, whether for profit or nonprofit, and is used to prevent exchanges or communication that could lead to conflicts of interest, thereby safeguarding
Though whether is used, I still feel this is the best option of all.
Modifiers used correctly at right places and verb tenses correct. D. also known as a screen or firewall, a business term describing an information barrier within an organization, either a for profit or nonprofit one, to prevent exchanges or communication that could lead to conflicts of interest is then used, which safeguards
Similar issues like A, hence discarded.E. a business term describing an information barrier within an organization, either a for profit or nonprofit one, also known as a screen or firewall, which prevents exchanges or communication that could lead to conflicts of interest, thereby safeguarding[/quote]
Similar issues like A, hence discarded.