IMO-CWes Craven, who was a horror-film director,
created a well-known catalog of films
both anchored in the slasher-film tropes of Pete Walker
and Robert Fuest, yet his forays into mainstream dramatic films
helped him achieve respect among a wider audience of film fans and critics.
Meaning Analysis: Wes Craven was a
horror- film director. [ Modifier in passage ]
He
created a
catalog of films that was anchored in the Slasher-film tropes of Pete Walker & Robert Fuest
His
incursion into dramatic films helped him achieve
respect among a wider audience.
Error Analysis:(A)
Wes Craven,
who was a horror-film director,
created a well-known catalog of films
both anchored----
Incorrect ---Modifier portion "who was a horror-film director" is quite wordy when a better version "a horror-film director" can be used. Also position of
both is such that it seems referring to Catalog of films, that is nonsensical as a single entity cannot be both.
(B) Wes Craven, a horror-film director, created a well-known catalog of films anchored
both----Incorrect- ---Elements in Idiom
Both X
& Y are not parallel. X- a prepositional phrase [
X- in the slasher-film tropes of Pete Walker] , Y- Noun [
Y- Robert Fuest]. Also Meaning wise it seems as if catalog of Films anchored itself whereas intended meaning is that the catalog of films was anchored.
(C) Horror-film director Wes Craven created a well-known
catalog of films that was anchored----
Correct--- "
That"refers to the
catalog of films. Portion after that act as modifier stating that "
Catalog of films was anchored in the slasher-film tropes of Pete Walker and Robert Fuest, Here both element in X (Pete Walker)
& Y (Robert Fuest) are parallel.
(D) Horror-film director Wes Craven, who created a well-known catalog of films
anchored----
Incorrect- ----Verb missing for the subject
Wes Craven(E) Horror-film director
Wes Craven, who created a well-known catalog of films anchored both----
Incorrect ----Verb missing for the subject
Wes Craven