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The German chancellor and dictator, Adolf Hitler, whom historians have noted had a hypnotic effect on large audiences, once debarred from public speaking, so he had to appoint Gregor Strasser to advance his political ambitions.
A: The German chancellor and dictator, Adolf Hitler, whom historians have noted had a hypnotic effect on large audiences, once debarred from public speaking, so he had to appoint
B: Once debarred from public speaking, the German chancellor and dictator, Adolf Hitler, whom historians have noted had a hypnotic effect on large audiences, had to appoint
C: The German chancellor and dictator, Adolf Hitler, who historians have noted had a hypnotic effect on large audiences, was once debarred from public speaking, so he had to appoint
D: The German chancellor and dictator, Adolf Hitler, whom historians have noted had a hypnotic effect on large audiences, was once debarred from public speaking, and appointed
E: The German chancellor and dictator, Adolf Hitler, who historians have noted had a hypnotic effect on large audiences, was once debarred from public speaking, so he had appointed
One quick thing before getting into solving this:
I had 3 books. - This is correct. Here `had` acts as simple past tense.
I had invited 30 guests. - This is wrong in if there are no event sequencing supporting this sentence.
Meaning:The German chancellor and dictator, Adolf Hitler, whom
historians have noted had a hypnotic effect on large audiences, once debarred from public speaking, so he had to appoint Gregor Strasser to advance his political ambitions.
Here, 3 things are told about Adolf Hitler:
1. The German chancellor and dictator
2.
whom who had a hypnotic effect on large audiences
3. once debarred from public speaking
So he had to appoint Gregor Strasser to advance his political ambitions.
Errors:1.
whom who had a hypnotic effect on large audiences - whom is wrong, it should be who.
2. Now, from FANBOYS rule, 'so' should connect two clause. Two make first part (part before 'so he had'), we need a verb.
Ex:
was once debarred from public speaking
A: The German chancellor and dictator, Adolf Hitler,
whom historians have noted had a hypnotic effect on large audiences, once debarred from public speaking, so he had to appoint
B: Once debarred from public speaking, the German chancellor and dictator, Adolf Hitler,
whom historians have noted had a hypnotic effect on large audiences,
had to appointC: The German chancellor and dictator, Adolf Hitler, who historians have noted had a hypnotic effect on large audiences, was once debarred from public speaking, so he had to appointD: The German chancellor and dictator, Adolf Hitler,
whom historians have noted had a hypnotic effect on large audiences, was once debarred from public speaking,
and appointed
- Added error by 'and', misses the intented meaning that 'so' brings as reason of appointment.
E: The German chancellor and dictator, Adolf Hitler, who historians have noted had a hypnotic effect on large audiences, was once debarred from public speaking, so
he had appointedAnswer(C)Thank you!