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Heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved from the previous year, only look less appetizing than their round and red supermarket
cousins, often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises, but are more flavorful.
(A) cousins, often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises, but are
(B) cousins, often green and striped, or with plenty of bumps and bruises, although
(C) cousins, often green and striped, or they have plenty of bumps and bruises, although they are
(D) cousins; they are often green and striped, or with plenty of bumps and bruises, although
(E) cousins; they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises, but they are.
kinjiGC
Hi Mike,
I would like to have your inputs on the question. I prefer option E) to A) but I am not sure. Can you please explain once.
Thanks, Kinjal
Dear
Kinjal,
I am happy to respond.

This questions is quite curious, because it's almost identical in topic to OG13, SC #132, and uses many of the same phrases, though in a different order. I would think that GMAC might be a position to sue a company for having a question so blatantly similar to its own. That does give me a bit of concern about the question and its authors.
In
(A) -
(C), among other problems, there's modifier ambiguity. We know logically that "
often green and striped" should apply to heirloom tomatoes, but it touches "
their round and red supermarket cousins." That's less than ideal.
Also, in
(A), if we remove the modifying detail, the logic is wonky: "
Heirloom tomatoes ... only look less appetizing ... or have plenty of bumps and bruises" ??? Why is that a choice, to "
look less appetizing" vs. "
to have bumps and bruises"? Joining these two verbs with "
or" makes no sense. That's why
(A) is definitively wrong.
The semicolon divide is a very clean, clear way to delineate the logic of the sentence. The parallelism removes any ambiguity about the pronoun: the pronoun "
they" is subject of the second clause, so it is obviously in parallel to the subject of the first clause, and that first subject, "
Heirloom tomatoes," is the antecedent. This is why
(E) is the best answer.
Does all this make sense?
Mike