leeye84 wrote:
Unlike transplants between identical twins, whose genetic endowment is the same, all patients receiving hearts or other organs must take antirejection drugs for the rest of their lives.
(A) Unlike transplants between identical twins, whose genetic endowment is the same
(B) Besides transplants involving identical twins with the same genetic endowment
(C) Unless the transplant involves identical twins who have the same genetic endowment
(D) Aside from a transplant between identical twins with the same genetic endowment
(E) Other than transplants between identical twins, whose genetic endowment is the same
In A and B, the phrases beginning
Unlike… and
Besides… modify
patients, the subject of the main clause; thus A absurdly states that
Unlike transplants…, patients…must take…drugs, and B that
all patients except for
transplants…must take… drugs.
In B and D the expression
identical twins with the same genetic endowment wrongly suggests that only some identical twin pairs are genetically identical.
In E, the construction
Other than transplants…, all patients… must take… drugs illogically suggests, as in B, that some patients are transplants.
Choice C, the best answer, solves these problems by using a clause introduces by
Unless to describe the exception to the rule and a nonrestrictive clause beginning with
who to describe the characteristic attributed to all identical twins.
https://www.nytimes.com/1964/02/09/archives/progress-hailed-in-transplants-but-much-is-still-unsolved-in-organ.htmlThe discovery in the late 1950's by Dr. William Dameshek and Dr. Robert Schwartz of Tufts University that
certain anticancer drugs tended to suppress transplant rejections spurred research activity in transplants between unrelated persons.
Immunological rejection usually does not occur in transplants between identical twins because they
have the same genetic endowment. The rejection problem between fraternal twins is intermediate and that between unrelated persons is great.
https://www.nytimes.com/2000/05/02/health/domino-transplants-rare-and-risky.htmlMr. Cawley and Mrs. Hubbard have yet to meet each other, but say they hope to do so. Both are reported to be doing well, but will have to take anti-rejection drugs for the rest of their lives.
Options (A), (B), (D) and (E) start with prepositions or phrasal prepositions depicting an exception to 'all patients.' They have the noun 'transplant/transplants' after them. Whatever comes after the prepositions must be an exception to 'all patients' but 'transplants' cannot be the exception to 'all patients.'
Option (C) uses 'unless' which is a subordinate conjunction and hence gives a subordinate clause after it. A subordinate clause does not modify the subject of the main clause.
Unless the transplant involves identical twins..., all patients receiving hearts ...
The issue of commas is present in (C) but GMAT does use commas sparingly. I would hesitate to eliminate any option based on just the absence of commas. I would have preferred 'who have ...' as a non essential modifier since it gives extra information but all other options are certainly incorrect.
So (C) is the best answer.
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