Official Solution:All business owners invited to bid for the lucrative construction project realize that, in order to secure the contract, they must have presented an exceptionally well proposal.A. have presented an exceptionally well proposal
B. have presented their proposal exceptionally well
C. present an exceptionally well proposal
D. present an exceptionally good proposal
E. present a good proposal exceptionally
The underlined portion of the sentence requires adjustment in two areas: verb form and diction in terms of the word
well. The words
invited in the first clause and the phrase
in order to in the second indicate that the third clause of the sentence must be in future tense, not past perfect as in the question stem. Also, the word
well in the question stem is an incorrectly used adverb, when the sentence calls for the adjective
good to modify the noun
proposal.
A.
Well is an adverb and incorrectly modifies
proposal. Also,
must have presented is in past perfect tense, when the sentence calls for future tense. B. This option uses well as an adverb that modifies
exceptionally, but the meaning of the original sentence has been changed. Also, the first two clauses of the sentence indicate that future tense is necessary for the verb.
C.
Must present identifies changes that should be made to the verb in the original sentence, but
well incorrectly modifies
proposal.
D. This option makes needed changes to both verb form and the word
well as a modifier.
They must present is correct future tense, and the adverb
well has been changed to the correct
good, and adjective that modifies
proposal.
E. This option changes and confuses the meaning of the sentence by changing
exceptionally from an adjective modifying
good proposal to an adverb modifying
present.
Answer: D