A new breed of investor, among private‐equity firms, hedge funds, and activist shareholders, is aggressively looking for opportunities for creating value from portfolio moves in companies the older investors regard as too passive.
A. is aggressively looking for opportunities for creating value from portfolio moves in companies the older investors regard as too passive.
errors - 'for creating value'B. is aggressively looking for opportunities to create value from portfolio moves in companies that the older investors regard as too passive.
correct - 'to create' + 'regard as'C. is aggressively looking for opportunities to create value from portfolio moves in companies the older investors consider as too passive.
consider only - there is no consider as or consider to beD. are aggressively looking for opportunities to create value from portfolio moves in companies the older investors regard to be too passive
'raegard to be'.
E. are aggressively looking for opportunities at creating value from portfolio moves in companies that the older investors regard as too passive.
wrong tense - 'creating', 'looking'