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Project SC Butler: Day 82: Sentence Correction (SC2)
For SC butler Questions Click Here Founded on the principles of free thought and equality, the Transcendentalists began a society that promoted intellectual debate, literary achievement, and support for women's suffrage.
A. Founded on the principles of free thought and equality,
B. Founding it on the principles of free thought and equality,
C. With the principles of free thought and equality used as a foundation,
D. By the principles of free thought and equality, which they used,
E. Guided by the principles of free thought and equality,
The best/excellent answers get kudos, which will be awarded after the answer is revealed.
There may be no best/excellent answers, or a there may be a few excellent answers!Official Explanation:
Because the underlined portion of the sentence contains an introductory modifying phrase, check that this phrase correctly modifies the appropriate noun. As written, the phrase founded on the principles of free thought and equality, incorrectly modifies Transcendentalists (people, who cannot be founded) instead of correctly modifying society (a group, which can be founded). This is a misplaced modifier error, so eliminate choice A and look for obvious repeaters. There are no obvious repeaters, so evaluate the remaining answer choices individually, looking for reasons to eliminate each.
Choice B addresses the original misplaced modifier error by changing the construction of the introductory phrase, but in doing so it introduces a pronoun, it, which could refer to thought, debate, achievement, or society. This is a pronoun ambiguity error, so eliminate choice B. Choice C has the phrase, with the principles…as a foundation incorrectly modifying the Transcendentalists, which is a misplaced modifier error, so eliminate choice C. Choice D has the phrase, by the principles…they used, incorrectly modifying the Transcendentalists, which is a misplaced modifier error, so eliminate choice D. Choice E fixes the original misplaced modifier error by using the phrase, guided by the principles…equality to correctly modify the Transcendentalists, and it introduces no new errors, so keep choice E.
Choice A: No. The introductory phrase, Founded on…equality, incorrectly modifies the Transcendentalists. Misplaced modifier.
Choice B: No. The pronoun it could refer to thought, debate, achievement, or society. Pronoun ambiguity.
Choice C: No. The introductory phrase, With the principles…as a foundation, incorrectly modifies the Transcendentalists. Misplaced modifier.
Choice D: No. The introductory phrase, By the principles…which they used, incorrectly modifies the Transcendentalists. Misplaced modifier.
Choice E: Correct.