The presence (N)
of both plant impressions and phytoliths (Prepositional Phrase)
led (V)
researchers (Object)
analyzing soil in and around Mesolithic graves in Israel (V+ing modifier describing researchers)
to conclude (Infinitive/showing intent) (a 'that' perhaps is missing but not necessary)
there was habitual use of plants
(, and particularly of flowering and aromatic varieties,)---Extra info (what kind of plants? flowering and aromatic type)
in the rituals associated with burial of the dead at Raqefet.
Gist: The presence of plant impressions and P led researchers to conclude that there was habitual use of flower/aromatic plants in the rituals associated with burial of the dead at R.
No errors!
A.researchers analyzing soil in and around Mesolithic graves in Israel to conclude there was habitual use of plants, and particularly of flowering and aromatic varieties, in the rituals associated with burial of the dead at Raqefet ---Correct
B. researchers
who would analyze soil in and around Mesolithic graves in Israel
to conclude there had been habitual use of plants, and particularly flowering and aromatic varieties, in the rituals in association with burial of the dead at Raqefet
--Researchers were not analyzing the soil to conclude something. The presence of plant impression led researchers to led ...blah blah..
C. researchers who
had analyzed soil in and around Mesolithic graves in Israel
to conclude that in the rituals associated with burial of the dead in Raqafet,
there had been habitual plant use, and particularly flowering and aromatic varieties
--unnecessary use to past perfect. No 2 past event mentioned here.
--Again same error as B .Researchers did not analyze the soil to conclude something
D. researchers, analyzing soil in and around Mesolithic graves in Israe
l to conclude there was habitual use of plants in the rituals associated with burial of the dead at Raqefet,
and particularly of flowering and aromatic varieties--there should have been a comma in between Israel and to conclude
--the last modifier 'and particularly of flowering and aromatic varieties' is not clearly modifying the plants.
E. researchers analyzing soil in and around Mesolithic graves in Israel
in concluding particularly flowering and aromatic varieties of plants were in habitual use in the rituals associated with burial of the dead at Raqefet.
--Concluding flowering and aromatic varieties?