OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
Rather than waiting to die, Oregon’s right-to-die law permits mentally stable people, which have less than six months to live, access to medication to accelerate their demise. Issues tested?• modifiers
GMAC really likes to test introductory modifiers
Right after we read the intro phrase,
[r]ather than waiting to die, we should be reading about whomever or whatever that phrase refers to.
Noun modifiers should "touch" the nouns that they describe.
• relative pronouns:
which, that, who→ when we refer to things, we always use
which or
that and never use
who.
Who is used to refer to people.
→ when we refer to people, we almost always use
who. On rare occasions, a group of people, such as a "choir" or "battalion," can be described with
which or
that.
Quote:
A) Rather than waiting to die,
Oregon’s right-to-die law permits mentally stable
people, which have less than six months to live, access to medication to accelerate their demise.
• Modifier misplacement
Oregon's right-to-die law is not waiting to die. Terminally ill
people who have less than six months to live are waiting to die.
• we use
who to refer to people, not
which (or
that)
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) Rather than waiting to die,
Oregon’s right-to-die law permits mentally stable
people that have less than six months to live to access medication to accelerate their demise.
• Modifier error: Oregon's law is not waiting to die
• we use
who to refer to people, not
that (
that is used to refer to things)
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) Rather than waiting to die,
the demise of mentally stable people who have less than six months to live can be accelerated by Oregon’s right-to-die
law who permits them access to medication.
• modifier error:
the demise (i.e. passing) is not waiting to die
• we use
that to refer to a law (a thing), not
who;
who is used only to refer to people
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) Rather than waiting to die,
mentally stable people who have less than six months to live are permitted access to medication by Oregon’s right-to-die law to accelerate their demise.
• correct placement: the noun
mentally stable people correctly follows the phrase
rather than waiting to die• the sentence is succinct (and a bit macabre)
KEEP
Quote:
E) Rather then waiting to die, mentally stable people’s
demise can be accelerated by Oregon’s right-to-die law, permitting
them access to medication
provided [that] they have less than six months to live.• modifier error:
the demise (i.e. passing) is not waiting to die
• awkward placement:
provided [that] they have less than six months to live should be closer to the mentally stable
people, Compare to option D, in which placing the modifiers and noun close together makes it easy to understand meaning.
•
THEM - is not enough reason to eliminate this answer
→ many of you have been taught that a subject (they) or object (them) pronoun cannot refer to a possessive antecedent
This "rule" is often referred to as the "possessive poison" rule
→ good sources get this rule wrong
→ you should believe the official questions, in which
possessive poison is not an ironclad ruleI wrote a post about "possessive poison," in which I explain the concept and demonstrate that the rule is far from strong: I include a few official SC questions in which a pronoun is allowed to refer to a possessive antecedent. There are quite a few more such official questions.
You can find that post
by clicking here.
[If this last bullet point confused you, do not worry. Read the post I linked. If you are still confused, let the issue go and read for 30 minutes.]
ELIMINATE E
Option D is the answer.COMMENTSDinoPen , good to "see" you again. It's been awhile.
As I mentioned in my other OE, electricity and internet have been spotty for a couple of days here, so I may sound abrupt (and I don't mean to do so).
Most of these answers are very good.
AntrikshR , I am bumping your post to Best Community Reply.
Be safe, everyone.