OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
Quote:
Researchers have suggested that soft music and gentle humming
is perceived as soothing because humans, like many social animals, are predisposed in interpreting silence as a sign of danger.
A)
is perceived as soothing because humans, like many social animals, are predisposed
in interpretingB)
have been perceived to be soothing because humans,
like many social animals
tend to be,
have the predisposition to interpretC) are perceived as soothing because humans, like many social animals, are predisposed to interpret
D)
is perceived to be soothing because humans, just
as many social animals, are predisposed
in the interpretation ofE) are perceived as soothing
due to humans, like many social animals,
having the predisposition to interpret
• Split #1: Subject/verb agreementAll the choices except option B contain
is or
are.
Now we know that subject-verb agreement is being tested.
When you are not working under intense pressure, this subject is easy to find:
soft music and gentle humming.Strategy tip: under intense pressure, don't let your eye get tricked by formatting.
That is, your eye will want to follow the formatted underline of the question.
The underlined
is perceived follows the singular noun
humming.
Because you noticed that the options are split between
is and
are, you will remember to search for the whole subject.
Options A and D incorrectly pair the singular verb is with the plural subject
soft music and gentle humming.(Option D also incorrectly uses "just AS" and should use "just like."
In comparisons, the word AS must be followed by a clause
with a verb, even if the verb is implied. In this case, no verb exists, implied or otherwise. The word AS does not always have to be followed by a clause.)
ELIMINATE A and D
• Split #2: DUE TOWhen you see "due to," see whether you can replace it with "caused by" (or "resulting from" or "attributable to").
If the replacement works, then
due to is correct.
If
caused by does not work,
due to is not correct.
Option E incorrectly uses
due to. Insert
caused by. Fail.
Part of the problem is that
having should be
have and
due to should be
because.
It is enough to know that due to fails.In addition, option E's use of
having the predisposition to interpret is long-winded and unwieldy, especially compared to the parallel phrase in (C).
ELIMINATE E
• Split #3: LIKE and STYLEWe are down to options B and C.
The word
like is a
preposition and thus can be followed only by a noun, pronoun, or noun phrase.
If you see the word
like (which means "similar to") in the same clause as a verb, you are almost certainly looking at error.
Option B erroneously uses
like many social animals tend to be.Wrong. No verb allowed.
Option C solves the problem, using only
like many social animals as a phrase set off by a comma. No verb.
Option C wins.
Suppose that this whole
like/as issue confuses you. (Try to simplify: in comparisons,
like cannot be followed by a verb and
as must be followed by a verb.)
Option C is stylistically superior to option B.
→ The verb tense switch in B is a distraction except to the extent that the verb tense makes the sentence longer than is necessary.
→ Stylistically, this pairing is not a contest: Option C handily beats option B.
--
are predisposed to interpret in (C) is more concise and forceful than
have the predisposition to interpret in (B).
--
perceived as soothing in (C) is less wordy than
perceived to be soothing (yes, one word counts).
ELIMINATE D
The answer is C.
COMMENTSJust as is the case on today's other question, aspirants here range from newcomers (yet again, welcome) to veterans.
Excellent!
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That tenacity is especially evident in Verbal generally and SC specifically.
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