“A recent review of the West Cambria volunteer ambulance service revealed a longer average response time to accidents than was reported by a commercial ambulance squad located in East Cambria. In order to provide better patient care for accident victims and to raise revenue for our town by collecting service fees for ambulance use, we should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service.”
The argument stating that "we should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service", is flawed because of some reasons mentioned below:
Firstly, the argument fails to give more reasons for disbanding the volunteer service and hiring a commercial one.
Secondly, we are not sure whether it is economically feasible to get more number of commercial ambulances, compared to the volunteer ambulances.
Moreover, the argument uses certain ambiguous terms such as "longer average response time". It is just comparing the response time of the volunteer ambulance with that of the commercial ambulance. The premise doesn't mention anything about the response time which can be considered safe for the patients to reach the patient care centres and get themselves treated.
We don't know if the " longer than average response time" is long enough for any patient care to be given to the patients or not.
Lastly, the conclusion is too strong. It forms an opinion about disbanding the volunteer service only on one factor. Had there been more factors suggesting poor service of the volunteer ambulance service, they would've supported the conclusion.
The argument can be strengthened if it mentions certain things like the maximum time that can be given to the ambulances to reach the patient care centers.
Some more factors such as comparison of the services offered by commercial and volunteer ambulance services can be thrown light upon, in order to support the conclusion more.