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When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Conventions in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
(A) When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Conventions in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
(B) Including a call for female enfranchisement, a draft of the Declaration of Sentiments was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention in 1848 that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote.
(C) When the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention in 1848, a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it .
(D) A call for female enfranchisement, included in Elizabeth Cady Stanton’s draft of the Declaration of Sentiments in 1848, that was adopted by the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention.
(E) When Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention in 1848, she included in it a call for female enfranchisement.
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Meaning is crucial to solving this problem:Understanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended meaning of this sentence is that while drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention in 1848, Elizabeth Cady Stanton included a call for female enfranchisement.
Concepts tested here: Meaning + Modifiers + Grammatical ConstructionA:1/ This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence by using "When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments...1848" to modify the clause "included in it by the author...was a call for female enfranchisement", producing an incoherent meaning; the intended meaning is that while drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention in 1848, Elizabeth Cady Stanton included a call for female enfranchisement.
B:1/ This answer choice incorrectly modifies the noun "the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention in 1848" with the phrase "that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote", illogically implying that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote
the convention; the intended meaning is that Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted
the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the convention.
C:1/ This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it"; the construction of this phrase incorrectly implies that
by the time the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention in 1848,
an unspecified entity had included a call for female enfranchisement in the draft; the intended meaning is that
while she was drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention in 1848,
Elizabeth Cady Stanton, herself, included a call for female enfranchisement.
D:1/ This answer choice fails to form a complete sentence; as "included" is a past participle acting as a modifier and "was adopted" is part of a modifying phrase, there is no active verb to act upon the subject noun phrase "A call for female enfranchisement".
E: Correct.1/ This answer choice acts upon the independent subject "she (Elizabeth Cady Stanton)" with the active verb "included" to form a complete thought, producing a complete sentence.
2/ Option E correctly modifies "the Declaration of Sentiments" with the phrase "that was adopted", conveying the intended meaning - that Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted
the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the convention.
3/ Option E uses the phrase "When Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted...in 1848" to modify the clause "she included in it a call for female enfranchisement"; the construction of this phrase and this clause convey the intended meaning - that
while she was drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention in 1848,
Elizabeth Cady Stanton, herself, included a call for female enfranchisement.
Hence, E is the best answer choice.All the best!
Experts' Global Team