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Hi Cantona, great question. Both of your examples are correct. "One of the factors that keep the team alive is its perseverance under difficult circumstances" would be a legal sentence. This is really a modifier issue; "that keep the team alive" modifies "factors," and so the subject of the verb that follows is therefore "One."

Stop right there if you're not interested in super-picky grammar stuff (you've been warned!)

The sentence you wrote does sound wrong to many people, even though it is correct. That's because in more informal settings, we say "One of the factors that keeps the team alive is its perseverance under difficult circumstances." In this version of the sentence, here's how everything works:

"One": the subject
"of the factors": modifies "One"
"that keeps the team alive": also modifies "One"!! This is unusual because a noun modifier beginning with "that" needs to touch the noun it modifies, except for a few rare exceptions that we generally don't discuss because the GMAT doesn't test the distinction. Generally speaking, the exception happens when we string two noun modifiers together, the first of which is short (like "of the factors"). You can think of "One of the factors" here as a noun phrase, so "that keeps the team alive" modifies that whole phrase, which is singular because we're only talking about one factor.

So both versions of the sentence could technically be correct. But I think your version is most likely to appear on the GMAT.
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Perfect, I really needed some confirmation on the modification part.

You have summed it up quite nicely here:

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This is really a modifier issue; "that keep the team alive" modifies "factors," and so the subject of the verb that follows is therefore "One."

This is generally the structure of GMAT questions as well, so I will continue along this path.

Thank you,

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