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You have essay drafts, and they’re shaping up pretty well. Yet, you want a fresh, critical eye to review them. You wisely recognize that Mom, who edited all your high school papers, or Cousin Harold, who got into a good MBA program, may not have the writing expertise or broad knowledge of MBA admissions you want for the job. So you’ve come to Accepted. You’ve come to the right place. 

For those of you who have already written your essays, are confident of your writing abilities, and want to save some money, Accepted’s Review and Editing has the following advantages:
  • Flexibility.
  • One-on-one service from a seasoned professional editor.
  • Prompt two-business-day turnaround.
  • You pay for what you need.
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May 25 | 2013
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     By gmat1220 868 404
This review is for: Accepted MBA Essay Editing
Consultant: Cindy Tokumitsu

Let me tell you a little background. I am Senior Project Manager with Citibank Singapore. I took about two week's time to write my final drafts. The first company I thought of hiring to work on my drafts is a local Singapore admissions consulting. When they came to know that I was running late to meet the application deadline, they hiked their prices by 100%. When I was on the phone with the company's director I somehow had the feeling that something isn't right. However I thought of giving them a benefit of doubt. However when I reached their local office, I was convinced that I am making the right decision by not engaging them. And then I found this article which echoed the promise to get the job done. This article is written by Cindy Tokumitsu.

http://blog.accepted.com/2012/08/19/chicago-booth-executive-mba-2013-admissions-tips/

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Ohh what can I say about Cindy. I called her on Tuesday evening with a plan to meet the deadline of Friday. It was overseas call and most of my interactions with Cindy were over the emails. She was able to review and critique my essays. Being able to grasp things effortlessly on the emails is a bridge few could cross. While working with Cindy I got used to her style of working. I learnt that she is a morning person. So most of the drafts I have sent to her were by 6:00 PM Singapore time which is 6:00 AM New York time. She took care to inform me about her schedules before hand so that my timelines would not be impacted. I enjoyed working with her immensely and I am completely satisfied with her work. These proud emotional moments, of being admitted to the Booth program, which I am experiencing now is the result of my hard work and invaluable insights provided by Cindy on my essays. I wish her the very best.

regards
gmat1220
Chicago Booth EMBA (Class of 2015)

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EMBA Admission Essays
July 12 | 2016
1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful
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     By Ramesh76 0 0
This review is for: Accepted MBA Essay Editing
Consultant: Cindy Tokumitsu

I worked with Cindy to craft my essays for part-time as well as EMBA programs at ASU. Cindy was very helpful, very experienced and gave me guidance on the content after talking to me briefly for the first time. Cindy's biggest asset is to present the content in fewer words without loosing the crux of your accomplishments. Cindy worked according to my schedule and she is very accommodative of my requests. Cindy asked me to buy an hour at a time and did not waste my time at all. Its the best decision I made and money well spent. Initially I crafted essays for part-time then I have to revise for EMBA. But, Overall based on the guidance she gave me for part-time helped me to craft my EMBA essays and it was just an hour with Cindy on my EMBA essays. I appreciate her guidance and time consciousness. I will not hesitate to recommend Cindy to future MBA aspirants. I thank Cindy and accepted.com team for reviewing and guiding me in admission process.

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     By saadiagha 3 1
This review is for: Accepted MBA Essay Editing
Consultant: Jennifer Weld

My essay writing was decent and I knew what story I wanted to tell the AdComs, I did not opt for the more expensive MBA consulting package but instead used Accepted's essay editing services. I just needed someone to read my essays and edit it- eliminate fluff and make them sharper. After doing some research I decided to go ahead with Accepted. I worked with Jen and was extremely happy with the response. The turnaround time was quick, her responses were accurate, and she even told me if she had managed to edit my essay before the hour. The extra time that I had purchased was used for editing my resume. I was very impressed with this honesty. All in all it was a great experience. If there is anyone else who needs purely essay editing services I would highly recommend Accepted.

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Awesome Service
June 28 | 2017
1 out of 1 people found the following review helpful
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     By aayush47 3 0
This review is for: Accepted MBA Essay Editing
Consultant: Karin

Working with Dr.Ash was a pleasure. I had hourly session with Dr. Karin Ash. She has a deep knowledge of the whole process and had really helped in understanding pitfalls in my essay. I did get several admits in b-schools this year but unfortunately my plans for MBA has changed as my goals have drastically changed.
I will be doing MBA 2-3 years from now. In the time being will work towards my goals and see how my idea pans out. In future I will surely use accepted services to get me through the hurdle. Kudos to accepted. a

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Worth the Investment
January 14 | 2017
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     By zamunda 0 0
This review is for: Accepted MBA Essay Editing
Consultant: Keith

Due to the high cost, I just started with a 1-hour session hoping to get some sort of direction. I was so impressed with my initial exchange with Keith that I purchased the 5-hour package immediately afterwards. Whether I got accepted or not, it would still have been worth the investment because I knew I was submitting the best possible application I was able to put together. For those of you who are on the fence due to the cost, I encourage you to start with the 1-hour session like I did. You will be impressed with their services, professionalism, and results.

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MBA Essay Editing with Accepted
December 27 | 2016
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     By nsark33 0 5
This review is for: Accepted MBA Essay Editing
Consultant: Cindy Tokumitsu

I worked with Accepted for help with editing my essays to UVA Darden and NYU Stern; It was a terrific experience and a big help in strengthening my application. My consultant helped in brainstorming essay topics, suggesting areas to add examples and strengthen the content, as well as editing the flow and grammar. My consultant's knowledge of what the different adcoms would be looking for was very valuable to my application, and offered much peace of mind that I was on the right track. I'm happy to report I was accepted to both of these schools, and am now applying to MIT Sloan, with Accepted's help of course. I would definitely recommend Accepted to anyone looking for some extra help and inside knowledge in writing their essays.

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Best EMBA Essay Editing
August 10 | 2016
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     By ab08 1 0
This review is for: Accepted MBA Essay Editing
Consultant: Cindy Tokumitsu

I choose accepted by seeing their reviews and the experience of editing experts. I am lucky to have Cindy as my editor. She have a great knowledge as what EMBA essay demands by school. She reviewed my draft version of essay and provided me elaborated comments on my essay and guided me as to where the necessary changes are required. She responded to my emails on time and the entire editing work was done on time and within agreed budget. The best part is I got selected by the school of my choice in round 1 and definitely would like to say that Cindy's suggestions was well appreciated.

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     By al1456 0 0
This review is for: Accepted MBA Essay Editing
Consultant: Jennifer Weld

I worked with Accepted.com after getting quotes and free "reviews" from a few other services. I found Accepted.com to make the most economic sense to me and also the most pleasant to work with. The staff was friendly and the process was clear. I worked with Jen who was AWESOME! I had a tight timeline for my 5 applications. Jen worked with me to prioritize what I needed to do and provided clear comments on where and how I should improve my essay and resume. I was accepted to all the schools I applied to and know that Jen's advice had a lot to do with that!

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     By TPayne06 0 0
This review is for: Accepted MBA Essay Editing
Consultant: Jennifer Weld

The service provided by Jen Weld and Robbie Walker at Accepted.com was exceptional. At first, I didn't know if I really needed help with editing my essays, since I had already been accepted into a top 5 master's program for international relations. However, business school applications are a completely different animal. Jen really helped me focus on how best to leverage my past experience to make me a viable candidate on paper. She was extremely honest in her feedback. Jen helped me draft and focus my essays to highlight my strengths and address my weaknesses in such a way that they would not make me seem less viable as a candidate. Robbie Walker also assisted me, and I appreciated her candor and making me complete multiple drafts of the same essay, when I would have taken the easy way out. Again, I wanted to write this review and say that I truly appreciate all of the assistance that both Jen and Robbie were able to provide me. I believe it was critical in getting accepted to a quality program that was the right fit for me. Also, I was accepted into a top 10 program and received a generous scholarship. I paid per service (hour) and never felt like my time was wasted. The advice and revisions were succinct and timely.

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     By divs173 11 1
This review is for: Accepted MBA Essay Editing

I worked with Michelle Stockman for almost 4 months, and I couldn't be happier with the assistance and support I received.

I initially had a free consultation call with Michelle, during which time we discussed schools, my profile, and the process of the application. Following this, I got started with my essays and boy, was I glad I signed up with Accepted! Michelle added great value to my essays in terms of providing suggestions to improvise, and polishing my essay drafts. She helped me identify valuable points about my profile that I didn't realize initially, and incorporated them to strengthen my essay pitch. Michelle also was very quick to respond to my drafts and emails, and was very honest in her feedback, which I also appreciated.

Overall, I would definitely recommend signing up with Accepted!

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