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I am still not clear why Option A is incorrect. Why can't we compare goal of a majority of young adults and goals of earlier generations?
Like goal of earlier generations, goal of a majority of young adults is owning and living in a freestanding house.
What is wrong in this? Please do help. Thanks in advance!
Here's the (A) version:
According to a recent poll, owning and living in a freestanding house on its own land is still a goal of a majority of young adults, like that of earlier generations.To more clearly see what's wrong with that sentence, let's remove the introductory modifier and put the end on at the beginning.
Like that of earlier generations, owning and living in a freestanding house on its own land is still a goal of a majority of young adults.We see that the sentence communicates that "owning and living in a freestanding house on its own land" is like "that of other generations" in that each of them is "still a goal of a majority of young adults."
So, one goal of young adults is "owning ... a house."
The other goal of young adults is "that of other generations."
What is "that of other generations"?????
Also, how is "that of other generations" still a goal of young adults?????
The sentence is practically gibberish.