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Re: Along a 15 mile stretch of desert, a dozen warehouses sit silent and [#permalink]
arbazfatmi1994 wrote:
What is wrong with the option E?


In E, ...relics of the city's dream.. is a noun + prep phrase and not a noun + noun modifier. So it's incorrect. ..relics that depict.. is correct.
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Re: Along a 15 mile stretch of desert, a dozen warehouses sit silent and [#permalink]
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The difference between A and E is

A. Along a 15 mile stretch of desert, a dozen warehouses sit silent and empty, relics that depict city's dream of becoming a national warehouse hub
In this option relics refer back to the warehouses and Noun+Noun modifier construction can refer only to the noun but not the entire clause.

E. Along a 15 mile stretch of desert, a dozen warehouses sit silent and empty, relics of city's dream of becoming a national warehouse hub
Here relics refer to the sitting of silent and empty warehouses or in simple it refers to the clause.


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Re: Along a 15 mile stretch of desert, a dozen warehouses sit silent and [#permalink]
Could you please tell why D is not correct ?

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Re: Along a 15 mile stretch of desert, a dozen warehouses sit silent and [#permalink]
Along a 15 mile stretch of desert, a dozen warehouses sit silent and empty, relics that depict city's dream of becoming a national warehouse hub.

A. Along a 15 mile stretch of desert, a dozen warehouses sit silent and empty, relics that depict city's dream of becoming a national warehouse hub every modifier is in perfect place. Correct


B. Along a 15 mile stretch of desert, a dozen warehouses, relics that the city will dream of becoming a national warehouse hub sit silent and empty misplaced modifiers

C. A dozen warehouses, relics of city's dream along a 15 mile stretch of desert of becoming a national warehouse hub, sit silent and empty wrong construction, illogical misplaced modifiers

D. A dozen warehouses, relics that the city dreams along a 15 mile stretch of desert of becoming a national warehouse hub, sit silent and empty misplaced modifiers

E. Along a 15 mile stretch of desert, a dozen warehouses sit silent and empty, relics of city's dream of becoming a national warehouse hub correct modifiers, but mentions relics of city’s dream. Wrong construction
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