Project SC Butler: Day 231: Sentence Correction (SC2)
THE PROMPTQuote:
Although staff at one fast-food chain, in an effort to encourage children to eat healthier, proposed that the company create a vegetable taste like bubblegum, the company’s chief executive officer ultimately reported that children who had tried the food expressed confusion about its flavor.
The worst part about this question is that it is probably based on fact.
Meaning? Company staff wanted to create a vegetable that tasted like bubblegum; they did so, but the children who tried the creation found its flavor confusing.
Quote:
A) Although staff at one fast-food chain, in an effort to encourage children to eat healthier, proposed that the company create a vegetable taste like bubblegum, the company’s chief executive officer ultimately reported that children who had tried the food expressed confusion about its flavor.
• "the food" refers to something that has been created, and a "vegetable taste [flavor]" is not a food
→ we need a vegetable THAT tastes like something
• even if you miss the meaning problem, the singular
vegetable is not in agreement with the plural verb
tasteEliminate A
Quote:
B) Although staff at one fast-food chain, in an effort to encourage children to eat healthier, proposed that the company create a vegetable tastes like bubblegum, the company’s chief executive officer ultimately reported that children who had tried the food expressed confusion about its flavor.
• same meaning problem as that in A
-- the staff created a food that children actually tried. That food must have been a vegetable.
The vegetable tasted like bubblegum. (Gah.)
-- . . .
create A vegetable tastes????-- if you read this sentence (incorrectly) as meaning that the staff wanted to create
a flavor, then A [singular article] does not match TASTES [plural]
Eliminate B
Quote:
C) Although staff at one fast-food chain, in an effort to encourage children to eat healthier, proposed that the company create a taste for a vegetable like bubblegum, the company’s chief executive officer ultimately reported that children who had tried the food expressed confusion about its flavor.
• unclear
It sounds as if the author says that the target vegetable is "like bubblegum" and that some unspecified flavor is being created for this food
• we need the sentence to make it clear that that flavor is like the flavor of bubblegum
Eliminate C
Quote:
D) Although staff at one fast-food chain, in an effort to encourage children to eat healthier, proposed that the company create a vegetable that has a taste like bubblegum, the company’s chief executive officer ultimately reported that children who had tried the food expressed confusion about its flavor.
• well, now meaning is correct
• this option is grammatical
KEEP D
Quote:
E) Although staff at one fast-food chain, in an effort to encourage children to eat healthier, proposed that the company create a vegetable that tastes like bubblegum, the company’s chief executive officer ultimately reported that children who had tried the food expressed confusion about its flavor.
• meaning is correct in this version, too
• compare D and E
• Both (D) and (E) confirm that people experienced the taste of the vegetable as that of bubblegum
D:
.. . create a vegetable that has a taste like bubblegumE:
.. . create a vegetable that tastes like bubblegumOption E is crisper and shorter.
The verb
tastes has more "punch" than the verb
has.Option E uses two words whereas D uses four.
Eliminate D.
The best answer is E NOTESzhanbo , yes. Although debate exists, if you're asking me, the word should be
healthier.That said,
1) I cannot rewrite copyrighted materials that I did not author, as I explained yesterday;and
2) In order to flag the issue that is not tested, I would have to write the sentence immediately below.
Although staff at one fast-food chain, in an effort to encourage children to eat healthier
[sic], proposed that the company create a
vegetable taste like bubblegum, the company’s chief executive officer ultimately reported that children who had tried the food expressed confusion about its flavor.
[sic] is editor-speak that means, "I am intentionally leaving this incorrectly written word as it is in the original."
I suspect that we would spend a lot of time talking about that strange
[sic] thing in the middle of the prompt.
Maybe not.
COMMENTSIt's been awhile since I've seen a few of you. Good to see you!
These answers ranger from good to excellent. Nice work.