Hi Damham17 and Thulsy,
First of all I would like to thank you both for taking the time to write detailed analysis of this question.
What you did well
I appreciate you taking the time to submit your analysis for this question. You got the right answer for the right reasons. Choice E is indeed the right answer and Like has been used correctly to convey the intended comparison. So you definitely got the meaning right and also correctly found out the appropriate grammatical construction for the sentence.
Where could you have done better
Now, I do notice small gaps in the elimination of answer choices. As I have explained in the solution, the Choices A and C have been eliminated because of SV errors.
In choice A, SV do not agree in number. Choice A also contains pronoun number error. In choice C, verb does not exist for subject DNA.
Now comes the question is "as with" incorrect? The answer is "no". See "as can be followed by a prepositional phrase", if we see application of ellipsis.
@Thulsy - you have touched upon this point in your response and I am glad that you did recognize that as can be followed by prepositional phrase. But I see that there is a slight gap in your understanding. When as is followed by a prepositional phrase, it is not required that the entity that it is compared with should also be a prepositional phrase. (On a tangential but definitely related note - I like your thought process - you are thinking about the intended meaning, then you are figuring out what is wrong with choice, and then you are applying splits in the answer choices - perfect approach!! Just read my comments below and see if you can add a bit more to your second step.)
Coming back to as + prepositional phrase - Lets take an example here:
"As with any well-executed marketing plan, sales jumped whenever fans were goosed with new media." - courtesy nytimes.com
Here the usage of "as with" is absolutely correct. Why? Because ellipsis is at play, How? the words "is the case" have been omitted to create a much more concise sentence.
So in choice A as well, we can assume the omitted words to be - as is the case with those of humans, ....- So here usage of 'as' is appropriate. But usage of "those" is not correct as stated earlier.
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damham17
My thought process behind answer
E:
The sentence is trying to convey how the DNA of grape plants behave similarly to human DNA (a comparison).
"As" needs to be followed by a clause and there is no verb in "As with those of humans"
"As" must be followed by a clause so B can be thrown out.
C can be thrown out because "it" is ambiguous.
"Like" must be followed by a noun. D can be thrown out because human is being compared to DNA which is incorrect.
E is correct. "Like" is followed by the noun "human DNA" demonstrating proper usage.
thulsy
Nice article! Thanks. Here's my take, your comments are greatly appreciated.
IMO: E
1. The intended meaning:
(1) a comparison between human DNA and grape DNA: these two are somewhat similar
(2) here's the similarity: they both contain sites where some nucleotide sequences are repeated
2. what's wrong with A?
As mentioned above, here the meaning is "comparison", not "function". Therefore, we need either "as + clause" or "like + noun".
Although sometimes "as" can be followed by a prepositional phrase (in which case the expression is indeed eclipse from the prototype "as + clause", for example, "As at school, I study hard at home."), here "as with those of humans" does not make sense.
In the case of "As with A, __________." the sentence should be comparing "with A" with another prepositional phrase, such as "with B". However, "with B" does not present.
Also, "those" do not have clear referent.
In a word, "As with those of humans" is problematic.
3. POE
Look vertically. The beginning of underlined part is definitely a split.
B. "As human DNA, ..." wrong.
C. "As it is with human DNA, the DNA of grape plants"
here "it" has no referent.
btw. this wrong expression reminds me of a correct idiom "as is the case with". it's interesting to note that GMAT sometimes distort this expression to creat wrong choices

D. " Like human, the DNA of grape plants"
This choice illogically compares human with DNA.
E. Correct.