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Re: Because Albert is the most experienced and he is therefore the best ba [#permalink]
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Because Albert is the most experienced and he is therefore the best ballet dancer in the company, he is being increasingly viewed by the director as the best candidate for the role of the Nutcracker.


(A) and he is therefore the best ballet dancer in the company, he is being increasingly viewed

(B) he is therefore the best of ballet dancers, and it has increased the view

(C) and therefore the best ballet dancer, he is being increasingly viewed

(D) and therefore he is the best of ballet dancers, there is an increasing view

(E) therefore being the best of ballet dancers, it is increasingly viewed


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Choices A, B and D are all repetitive as they use ‘he’, which is not needed because it is clear that Albert and only Albert is being referenced. Choice E does not have the correct parallel structure. It also incorrectly uses ‘it’ to refer to Albert. Choice C is the correct answer.
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