rajanyadav wrote:
Highly interested in Entrepreneurship and general management.
My request to the candidates who got it. Can they share their profile and some tips on essays with the ones who got dinged.
My essays were 550/550/650/650 in length.
We can take this to PM if you like but my number one concern would be this:
"Highly interested in Entrepreneurship and general management."
That's extremely general. I am also interested in Entrepreneurship, however I didnt say in my essays I was "interested" in it, I said
I was going to be a tech entrepreneur. My goals were hyper-specific. I basically gave the adcom a roadmap of my career, how I was going to get there, why I needed the MBA from Tuck to do it.
If you view Tuck as a business and the adcom as the hiring manager, your application should be for a certain position (your goals). You have to make them see the fit, that youre qualified for the position (or can make the transition given your abilities or past background). If you dont connect the dots in their head, its going to be hard to get in. I didnt read your essays so I dont know if they were themed as generally as I am assuming, but if you just said you are interested in entrepreneurship, it would be like going to Goldman Sachs, applying and telling them you are interested in Finance. You need to be more specific to get the goods. Just my $.02
Thanks for the reply. I was definitely more specific in my essays. I provided a clear roadmap of what I wanted to do with an MBA and how it will fit in to my career goals(Both short term and long term). I think that is why I am asking for help from people who got into Tuck. If I can read a successful essay and an application (a recent one), it will help me get an idea of what I missed, even if the profile is different than mine. I did read that successful candidates have helped in reviewing essays for other members on this forum once they get in and I am hoping for a similar kind of help if one has the time.