TA89
Hi,
I would appreciate if any of the admitted students could review my essay.
Unless you trust them completely -> NEVER share your essays with the admitted students. It will have a lot of personal ****. If you are admitted -> They will be your peers and would know your secrets. You want that to happen ?
Make a wise call.
P.S -> You can PM me incase you want recommendation for an editor.
Best
Stone Cold