badger,
You should strongly consider working with a trusted consultant, because it will take finesse, strategy, and real thought to make sure your goals story is a good one.
There's no reason your progression can't be viable, but I'm afraid this is one of those areas where it takes multiple revisions with an expert to make sure it is done right. There isn't really a quick note I can pass along as to what you should write.
Sorry to punt the answer like this, but that's the reality. If you want to set up a free initial consultation, PM me or email
[email protected] and we can start the process.
Respectfully,
Paul Lanzillotti