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Cherrapunji, an Indian town situated on the Eastern Himalaya's southern slopes,
has an average reported rainfall of 450 or even more than 450 inches of rainfall a year, making it one of the wettest places on Earth.
A. has an average reported rainfall of 450 or even more than 450 inches of rainfall a year, making it one of the wettest places on Earth
B. are one of the wettest on Earth with an average reported rainfall of at least 450 inches a year
C. have an average rainfall of at least 450 inches a year, making it one of the wettest places on Earth
D. is one of the wettest places on Earth with an average reported rainfall of at least 450 inches a year
E. has been known to average at least 450 inches of reported rainfall a year, making it one of the wettest places on Earth
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OFFICIAL EXPLANATION
Cherrapunji, an Indian town situated on the Eastern Himalaya's southern slopes, has an average reported rainfall of 450 or even more than 450 inches of rainfall a year, making it one of the wettest places on Earth.A. has an average reported rainfall of 450 or even more than 450 inches of rainfall a year, making it one of the wettest places on Earth
This answer choice is stylisically flawed. 450 or even more than 450 is redundant. Look for a more concise answer choice.
What helps us identify this question as a redundancy question as well as identify this mistake is the following Stop Sign:
B. are one of the wettest on Earth with an average reported rainfall of at least 450 inches a year
Although this answer choice corrects the redundancy of the original sentence, it is grammatically incorrect. The singular subject Cherrapunji does not agree with the plural verb are.
What helps us identify this mistake is the following Stop Sign:
A long, complex subject / A long distance between the subject and the verb
C. have an average rainfall of at least 450 inches a year, making it one of the wettest places on Earth
Although this answer choice corrects the redundancy of the original sentence, it is grammatically incorrect. The singular subject Cherrapunji does not agree with the plural verb have.
What helps us identify this mistake is the following Stop Sign:
A long, complex subject / A long distance between the subject and the verbD. is one of the wettest places on Earth with an average reported rainfall of at least 450 inches a year
Stylistically, this answer choice is the best of the five answer choices as it is the most concise. This was achieved thanks to a change in sentence structure and the omission of the unnecessary phrase making it.E. has been known to average at least 450 inches of reported rainfall a year, making it one of the wettest places on Earth
Although this answer choice corrects the redundancy of the original sentence and is grammatically correct, the addition of the phrase has been known to changes the meaning of the original sentence.