foryearss
What about this question :
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Compared with most Old World wines, California wines are
simpler and more fruit dominant . (considered right)
Compared to A, B is taller. (considered wrong)
A has more money, compared to B. (considered wrong)
Mo2men
1- Compared with the GMAT, the GRE is
easier.
or
Compared with the GMAT, the GRE is
easy.
2- Compared to John, Anne has
more money.
or
Compared to John, Anne has
significant amount of money.
Which one is correct?
Thanks in advance
Hm, this is a little bit tricky. Personally, I think that there's no good reason to write any of the following:
Compared with the GMAT, the GRE is easier.
Compared to John, Anne has more money.
Compared to A, B is taller.
A has more money, compared to B.
These all just seem redundant and silly to me. The fact that you're making a comparison is obvious from the phrase "compared to" or "compared with." So why "double" the comparison by using "easier" or "more" or "taller"? In all four of these cases, there are clearly much better ways to write the sentence.
But this is a little bit different:
1. Compared with most Old World wines, California wines are simpler and more fruit dominant.
2. Compared with most Old World wines, California wines are simple and more fruit dominant.
In this case, I'd argue that replacing "simpler" with "simple" -- removing the "double comparison" -- would change the meaning in an unfortunate way. If the sentence said "simple", then it would sound like California wines are actually simple, and then you'd be basically insulting California wines. (Speaking as an ex-Californian, ex-bartender: don't mess with California wines.) We want to say that California wines are
simpler than their Old World counterparts (and that's not actually true, incidentally -- there have been quite a few blind tasting competitions that suggest the opposite), not that California wines are
simple.
To be fair: technically speaking, the phrase "compared with most Old World wines" should make it clear that California wines are simple only
relative to Old World wines. But in reality, most readers would understand the meaning much more clearly if the sentence used "simpler" instead of "simple."
So there's really no hard-and-fast rule that you can apply to this situation, unfortunately. I'd love to say that it's ALWAYS REDUNDANT to use "compared with" or "compared to" with another comparison word ("simpler", "easier", etc.), but I think there are cases when it actually makes sense to do so. Those cases are rare, but they certainly exist.
Do I get a prize for writing the least satisfying answers ever?