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Considered to be one of the brightest upcoming legal scholars, Douglas Kysar has written countless articles on environmental law and policy; his writings, which include a book with renowned law professor Daniel Esty, is cited more often than most other young legal scholars.
A) is cited more often than most other
B) are cited more often than most other
C) is cited more often than those of most other
D) are cited more often than those of most other
E) are cited more often than are most other
OFFICIAL EXPLANATION
There are two major problems with this sentence.
(1) The subject (
his writings, which is plural) does not agree with the verb (
is, which is singular). Since the words
his writings are located outside the underlined portion, the verb
is must be changed to
are.
(2) The idiom
more often than is intended to compare the writings of Douglas Kysar with the writings of other young legal scholars. However, the original sentence compares Kysar's
writings with other young legal scholars. It does not make sense to compare writings to people. The correct comparison should compare the writings of Kysar to
those of most other young legal scholars, where the pronoun
those clearly refers to legal writings--not young professors.
A. The subject (
his writings, which is plural) does not agree with the verb (
is, which is singular); the writings of Douglas Kysar are illogically compared to
other young legal scholarsB. The writings of Douglas Kysar are illogically compared to
other young legal scholarsC. The subject (
his writings, which is plural) does not agree with the verb (
is, which is singular)
D. The subject (
his writings, which is plural) correctly agrees with the verb (
are, which is plural); the writings of Douglas Kysar are correctly compared to
those [referring to writings] of most other young legal scholarsE. The writings of Douglas Kysar are illogically compared to
other young legal scholars; the
are is awkward