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Costly X-rays often not needed, the OT rules were developed to aid in a doctor’s decision as to whether a patient with foot pain should be offered an X-ray, since only 5% of patients before the rules actually had fractures when X-rayed.

A. Costly X-rays often not needed, the OT rules were developed to aid in a doctor’s decision as to whether a patient with foot pain should be offered an X-ray, since only 5% of patients before the rules actually had fractures when X-rayed. Starting Modifier wrongly suggests the costly X-Rays are not needed and rest may be needed
B. The OT rules were developed to aid in a doctor’s decision as to whether a patient with foot pain should be offered an X-ray, since only 5% of patients before the rules’ development actually had fractures when X-rayed, and these X-rays were costly and often not needed.correct
C. Since only 5% of patients before the rules’ development actually had fractures when X-rayed, and these X-rays were costly and often not needed, the OT rules were developed to aid in a doctor’s decision as to whether a patient with foot pain should be offered an X-ray. Closest to correct answer only order of modifiers is changed and OT rules should be adjacet to its modifier
D. Developed to aid in a doctor’s decision as to whether a patient with foot pain should be offered an X-ray, only 5% of patients, when X-rayed, actually had fractures before the OT rules were developed, and X-rays were costly and often not needed.Dangling Modifier
E. The OT rules were developed to aid in a doctor’s decision as to whether a patient with foot pain should be offered an X-ray; X-rays were costly and often not needed, and 5% of patients, when X-rayed actually had fractures before the rules’ development.This seemed fine to me until the clauses after and, which changes the meaning

Quite confusing It was between B & C ,..I chose B and it took me 4.50 mins to select the answer
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The only difference between B and C is that of a subtle word order problem. In B, the main clause introduces the OT rules first and then follows it up with the rules’ development in the subordinate clause in the second part. Similarly, the X-rays have been introduced properly in the first part and then are anteceded by the pronoun ‘these’ in the latter part.

But in the case of C, the subordinate clause that is in the first part of the sentence talks of the rules’ development, even before, the term has been properly introduced; the actual introduction comes in the second part in the main clause. So also, C uses the pronoun ‘these’ in the first part, and uses the referred noun ‘x-rays’ in the latter part as postcedent rather than as antecedent.

C may technically be ok but still is considered inferior.
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