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Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils.

A) Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils
"dating" modifies Tanzania? and they refers to jawbones or teeth and jawbones, no clear reference

B) The oldest reliably dated human fossils were found by Dr. Mary Leakey in Tanzania, dating to 3.75 million years ago
what is dating modifying? Tanzania and there is no mention of teeth and jawbones

C) The teeth and jawbones found in Tanzania by Dr. Mary Leakey and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils
the teeth and jawbones found and dating to ,,,are -> looks good

D) In Tanzania, the teeth and jawbones found by Dr. Mary Leakey date to 3.75 million years ago and are the oldest reliably dated human fossils
this option changes the meaning, the teeth and jawbones are oldest reliably dated human fossils in tanzania

E) In Tanzania and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils, found by Dr. Mary Leakey
parallelism is not correct in this , In tanzania and dating to - are not parallel.

C is the answer!
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Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils.

A) Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils

B) The oldest reliably dated human fossils were found by Dr. Mary Leakey in Tanzania, dating to 3.75 million years ago

C) The teeth and jawbones found in Tanzania by Dr. Mary Leakey and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils

D) In Tanzania, the teeth and jawbones found by Dr. Mary Leakey date to 3.75 million years ago and are the oldest reliably dated human fossils

E) In Tanzania and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils, found by Dr. Mary Leakey

A) Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils - Dating modifies Tanzania rather than teeth and jawbones

B) The oldest reliably dated human fossils were found by Dr. Mary Leakey in Tanzania, dating to 3.75 million years ago - , Verb-ing here modifies the entire preceding clause - meaning error

C) The teeth and jawbones found in Tanzania by Dr. Mary Leakey and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils - Wrong meaning - Teeth and jawbones (variety x - Modifier Found in...) and Teeth and jawbones (variety Y - dating to) are

D) In Tanzania, the teeth and jawbones found by Dr. Mary Leakey date to 3.75 million years ago and are the oldest reliably dated human fossils - Correct <Is date to/dating to - correct construction? seems weird>

E) In Tanzania and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils, found by Dr. Mary Leakey - In tanzania and dating to 3.75 years must be placed near to human fossils
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Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils.

A) Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils ( dating modifies the tanzania, which is wrong. )

B) The oldest reliably dated human fossils were found by Dr. Mary Leakey in Tanzania, dating to 3.75 million years ago ( dating modifies the were found by Dr. Leakey, infact dating should modify the fossils, which is not happening here. so wrong)

C) The teeth and jawbones found in Tanzania by Dr. Mary Leakey and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils( need separators if IC is teeth and jawbones are the oldest reliably dated human fossils. so wrong)

D) In Tanzania, the teeth and jawbones found by Dr. Mary Leakey date to 3.75 million years ago and are the oldest reliably dated human fossils ( except for date to( which i dont know whether right or wrong) this sentence seems fine. and by POE only this remains. so correct choice)

E) In Tanzania and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils, found by Dr. Mary Leakey ( in tanzania and dating seems parallelism error or modifier error. so wrong)
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Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils.

A) Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils
- Incorrect. There is a modifier ambiguity, what does "they" refer to? Years? Teeth and jawbones?

B) The oldest reliably dated human fossils were found by Dr. Mary Leakey in Tanzania, dating to 3.75 million years ago
- Incorrect. There is a modifier issue again, i.e. is the part after comma modifying Tanzania or the entire preceding clause?

C) The teeth and jawbones found in Tanzania by Dr. Mary Leakey and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils
- Correct. The parallelism works nicely here:
(1) the teeth and jawbones found ... are the oldest
(2) the teeth and jawbones dating to ... are the oldest

So, found and dating are modifiers that work correctly.

D) In Tanzania, the teeth and jawbones found by Dr. Mary Leakey date to 3.75 million years ago and are the oldest reliably dated human fossils
- Incorrect. The sentence incorrectly moved "in Tanzania", and this act transformed the meaning of the sentence.

E) In Tanzania and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils, found by Dr. Mary Leakey
- Incorrect. The sentence has a serious SV mess.
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IMO the correct answer is C

Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils.

A) Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils - VerbING modifier when introduced without comma in a sentence tends to modifiy immediate preceding non, here "dating" incorrectly modifies "Tanzania" - INCORRECT

B) The oldest reliably dated human fossils were found by Dr. Mary Leakey in Tanzania, dating to 3.75 million years ago - Though a Passive construction is not a favorable option GMAT, but the main concern lies in VerbING modification error - "..., dating to 3.75 million ..." Incorrectly modifying the result of the previous preceding cluase - INCORRECT

C) The teeth and jawbones found in Tanzania by Dr. Mary Leakey and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils

VerbED & VerbING modifier can simultaneously used to modify the same subject when the sense of the sentence is maintained & Parallelism holds true for such cases. This sentence is a good example of this. - CORRECT

D) In Tanzania, the teeth and jawbones found by Dr. Mary Leakey date to 3.75 million years ago and are the oldest reliably dated human fossils - This Option is a bit tricky in terms of reading :dazed

we can spot a parallelis marker "and" - now to figure out the entities before & after "and" is what i struggled :roll:

In Tanzania, the teeth and jawbones...

Part 1 - found by Dr. Mary Leakey date to 3.75 million years ago
"AND"
In Tanzania, the teeth and jawbones...
Part 2 - are the oldest reliably dated human fossils

The second part seems a bit strange in terms of meaning - the Suparlative usage of "oldest" is not what is found only in "Tanzania" - :-o Not sure but seems strange to me

generis can help me out here, as always :blushing

E) In Tanzania and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils, found by Dr. Mary Leakey - not a parallel structure - INCORRECT
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I eliminate options B and E because they omit vital pieces of information teeth and jawbones are the oldest reliably dated human fossils. In addition, it is the teeth and jawbones that are dating to 3.75 million years ago, and this additional information adds to the meaning of the sentence.

Date to is unidiomatic. Hence we can eliminate option D. But if date to is unidiomatic, can dating to be idiomatic?

I eliminate A because of pronoun ambiguity. They can refer to teeth, jawbones and teeth and jawbones.

I will go with option C as the answer. Is there a parallelism issue in C? I don't think so, I may not be entirely right, but I believe that The teeth and jawbones found in Tanzania and the teeth and jawbones dating to 3.75 million years ago are parallel. Verb-ed modifier (past participle) found can be parallel to verb-ING modifier (gerund) dating.
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Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils.

A) Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils - Modifer dating to 3.75 seems to modify "T" which is not right. They can become ambiguous becasue it can refer to just the jawbones

B) The oldest reliably dated human fossils were found by Dr. Mary Leakey in Tanzania, dating to 3.75 million years ago - The same modifier issue from A.
Also, did we just remove teeth and jawbones?


C) The teeth and jawbones found in Tanzania by Dr. Mary Leakey and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils Parallelism error.. Found and dating.

D) In Tanzania, the teeth and jawbones found by Dr. Mary Leakey date to 3.75 million years ago and are the oldest reliably dated human fossils Parallelism looks okay. Meaning looks okay too.

E) In Tanzania and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils, found by Dr. Mary Leakey - What? And also we again got rid of teeth and jawbones for some reason.

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Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils.

A) Dr. Mary Leakey found teeth and jawbones in Tanzania dating to 3.75 million years ago, and they are the oldest reliably dated human fossils

B) The oldest reliably dated human fossils were found by Dr. Mary Leakey in Tanzania, dating to 3.75 million years ago

C) The teeth and jawbones found in Tanzania by Dr. Mary Leakey and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils

D) In Tanzania, the teeth and jawbones found by Dr. Mary Leakey date to 3.75 million years ago and are the oldest reliably dated human fossils

E) In Tanzania and dating to 3.75 million years ago are the oldest reliably dated human fossils, found by Dr. Mary Leakey

I'd vote C.

I don't think D is correct because, to me, it seems to imply that the assertion about these particular teeth and jawbones being the oldest is for the population of teeth and jawbones found in Tanzania, while the sentence clearly intends to imply that these teeth and jawbones are the oldest globally.
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I'd vote C.

I don't think D is correct because, to me, it seems to imply that the assertion about these particular teeth and jawbones being the oldest is for the population of teeth and jawbones found in Tanzania, while the sentence clearly intends to imply that these teeth and jawbones are the oldest globally.

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I kind of agree with you but what do you feel about Parallelism in option C?

Also, You don't just have to negate what everyone think is right. You should negate 4 wrong options and find no errors in one right option.

Thank you!
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