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Forcing children who show a preference for their left hand to use their right hand may not only result in speech
difficulties, creating behavioral problems.
A. difficulties, creating behavioral problems
B. difficulties but also creating behavioral problems
C. difficulties but may also create behavioral problems
D. difficulties; it also creates behavioral problems
E. difficulties; behavioral problems themselves are also created by it
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The underlined portion of the sentence contains the verb creating and the non-underlined portion of the sentence contains the verb result, so check for parallel construction errors. The non-underlined portion of the sentence also contains the beginning of the idiomatic construction not only…but also, so check for idiom errors. The verb creating is not parallel to the verb result, so there is a parallel construction error. Because the correct idiomatic structure is not only…but also and the underlined portion of the sentence does not complete the idiom with but also, there is also an idiom error. Eliminate choice A for both the parallel construction and idiom errors and look for obvious repeaters. Choice B is an obvious repeater of the parallel construction error since it also uses the verb creating, so eliminate choice B. Now, evaluate the remaining answer choices individually, looking for reasons to eliminate each.
Choice C fixes the original parallel construction error by using the verb create which is parallel to the verb result, fixes the idiom error by using the correct construction may not only…but may also, and introduces no new errors, so keep choice C. Choice D uses the verb creates which is not parallel to the verb result and uses the unidiomatic construction may not only…it also, so eliminate choice D for both the parallel construction and idiom errors. Choice E uses the verb created which is not parallel to the verb result and uses the unidiomatic construction may not only…also, so eliminate choice E for both the parallel construction and idiom errors.
Choice A: No. The verb creating is not parallel to the verb result and the idiom not only…but also is incorrectly written as not only. Parallel construction; Idiom.
Choice B: No. The verb creating is not parallel to the verb result. Parallel construction.
Choice C: Correct.
Choice D: No. The verb creates is not parallel to the verb result and the idiom not only…but also is incorrectly written as not only...it also. Parallel construction; Idiom.
Choice E: No. The verb created is not parallel to the verb result and the idiom not only…but also is incorrectly written as not only...also. Parallel construction; Idiom.
The correct answer is choice C.