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Although television dramas about legal trials,
where only select moments in a courtroom are depicted, make jurors’ responsibilities seem straightforward, the reality is much more complex, as we can discover in numerous documentaries about the justice system.
(A) where only select moments in a courtroom are depicted, make jurors’ responsibilities seem straightforward, the reality is much more complex, as we can discover
(B) which depict only select moments in a courtroom, make jurors’ responsibilities seem straightforward, the reality is much more complex, as can be discovered
(C) which depict only certain moments in a courtroom, makes the responsibilities of jurors seem straightforward, the reality is much more complex, as we can discover
(D) which depict only certain moments in a courtroom, make jurors’ responsibilities seem straightforward, but the reality is much more complex, as we discover
(E) where only select moments in a courtroom are depicted, makes the responsibilities of jurors seem straightforward, but the reality is much more complex, as can be discovered
Manhattan Prep Official ExplanationFirst Glance: Differences in the answer choices provide clues about what a problem might be testing. Before reading the sentence, glance at the beginning of the underline and down the beginning (just the beginning!) of the five answer choices to look for one early clue as to what this sentence is testing. In this sentence, some choices begin with the word
which and others begin with
where; keep an eye out for modifier issues. Some choices insert a verb (
depict) immediately after while others omit the verb and go straight to
only select/certain moments, signaling possible sentence structure issues or additional modifier issues.
Issues:
(1) Modifiers: Which vs. whereThe answer choices all begin with the word
which or the word
where. These are noun modifiers, which need to be as close as possible to the noun they modify. So what comes before the modifiers?
Television dramas about legal trials.
Where is used only as a modifier for a specific location, such as “... the hospital, where she works in the ICU.” But
television dramas about legal trials are not a specific location. Eliminate (A) and (E) for incorrectly using where.
(2) Modifiers: Although … butThe sentence starts with the word
although, which indicates some contrast is being made.
Although is not part of the underline, so it can’t change. As you read the rest of the sentence, pay attention to the contrast that it’s trying to convey.
Answer choices (D) and (E) differ from (A), (B), and (C) because they introduce a but into the second half of the sentence.
(D)
Although television dramas … make jurors’ responsibilities seem straightforward, but the reality is much more complex(E)
Although television dramas … makes the responsibilities of jurors seem straightforward, but the reality is much more complexUsing both
although and
but is redundant; use one or the other:
Correct: Although I enjoy school, I don’t like to go on Mondays.
Correct: I enjoy school, but I don’t like to go on Mondays.
Incorrect: Although I enjoy school, but I don’t like to go on Mondays.
Eliminate (D) and (E) for redundant meaning.
(3) Subject-Verb AgreementAnswer choices (A), (B), and (D) use the verb
make while (C) and (E) use
makes. When you see verbs change in a sentence, identify the subject to determine which verb form matches in number. In this sentence, the subject is the plural
television dramas, so it must be paired with the plural verb
make. Eliminate (C) and (E) for faulty subject-verb agreement.
The Correct Answer: Answer (B) correctly uses
which to modify
television dramas, resolving the issue that appears in the original sentence. It also avoids the new issues introduced in other answer choices: using both
but and
although and pairing the singular verb
makes with the plural subject
dramas.