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In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have risen dramatically.

(A) sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have

(B) sentences, performing specific jobs that benefit the public while being allowed to remain unconfined, have

(C) sentences, performing specific jobs beneficial to the public while they are allowed to remain unconfined, have

(D) sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has

(E) sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has

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What is the source of this Q?
Also,are you sure that the answer is E? Atleast I am not convinced. IMO, its A.

ans cannot be A,B,C because all have wrong subject-verb agrement,,,, In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences. which allow
the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have risen
dramatically. ..
the number requires has.. D is wordy .. only E remains , however it seems the options part after "that" is missing..
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I am re-posting this question coz i was not satisfied with the responses received in the 1st thread.

In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefitting the public, have risen dramatically.
i am confused b/w 2 options:
d)sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has
e)sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has...


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In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have risen dramatically.

(A) sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have
(B) sentences, performing specific jobs that benefit the public while being allowed to remain unconfined, have
(C) sentences, performing specific jobs beneficial to the public while they are allowed to remain unconfined, have
(D) sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has
(E) sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has


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At issue in this question is subject-verb agreement; the number ... has risen must be the kernel of the main
clause. Choice E, the best answer, uses a singular verb form, has, to agree with the singular subject, the
number
. Choices A, B, and C mistake criminals for the sentence subject and so incorrectly use the plural verb
form have. In B and C the verb phrases (performing .. . ) do not clearly modify criminals, because another noun
(sentences) intrudes, nor do the verb phrases clearly establish temporal relationships among events. D is wordy and imprecise (in their performing of specific jobs).
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E(if sentence is as MBAhereIcome has written)
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the number of requires has. and E looks incomplete.
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New post 26 Sep 2012, 00:30
The expression "the number of" is singular. Therefore, we can exclude answers A, B and C.
We are left with D and E. The phrase "in their performing" used in answer D is very awkward.
Answer E is the best option.
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In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences. which allow
the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have
risen
dramatically.
(A) sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting
the public, have
(B) sentences, performing specific jobs that benefit the public while being allowed to remain unconfined,
have
(C) sentences, performing specific jobs beneficial to the public while they are allowed to remain unconfined,
have
(D) sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the
public has
(E) sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that


"the number of.." is singular and should use "has" instead of "have". Thus, eliminate (A), (B) and (C)
"that their performing" is awkward - eliminate (D)

Answer: E
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The number is always Singular and requires singular verb . A,B,C --- eliminated

Among D and E , in option D which does not comma before it . D ---- eliminated .

Hence E :)
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Okay, got confused by the omitted words in the answer choices..though I went ahead and chose E.

Please edit the choice E to the correct one - "sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has"
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what is the role of "allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public "

In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has have risen dramatically.

The whole sentence with correct answer looks awkward.

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what is the role of "allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public "

In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has have risen dramatically.

The whole sentence with correct answer looks awkward.

Hi kannu44, GMAT is basically using a pretty long modifier (participial phrase, to be precise) to make this sentence look awkward. In the sentence below, I have underlined the intermediate modifier:

In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has risen dramatically.

So, the core of the sentence is:

In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals has risen dramatically.

This clearly doesn't look awkward.

In the intermediate modifier, there are many constructs, most notably:

i) Past participle phrase: given community service sentences
ii) Present participle phrase: allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs
iii) Relative clause: that benefit the public

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Isn't it essential? Sentence is not talking about all convicted criminals; only those who were given community service sentences.

In any case, GMAT does not really test on essentials/non-essentials.
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New post 01 Jun 2017, 05:04
The number + has
Between D and E, I choose D.
E has run on error.
IMO its D.
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In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have risen dramatically.

(A) sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have
(B) sentences, performing specific jobs that benefit the public while being allowed to remain unconfined, have
(C) sentences, performing specific jobs beneficial to the public while they are allowed to remain unconfined, have
(D) sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has
(E) sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has


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At issue in this question is subject-verb agreement; the number ... has risen must be the kernel of the main
clause. Choice E, the best answer, uses a singular verb form, has, to agree with the singular subject, the
number
. Choices A, B, and C mistake criminals for the sentence subject and so incorrectly use the plural verb
form have. In B and C the verb phrases (performing .. . ) do not clearly modify criminals, because another noun
(sentences) intrudes, nor do the verb phrases clearly establish temporal relationships among events. D is wordy and imprecise (in their performing of specific jobs).


D is considered wordy because we do not need to add possesive "their" in D. why do we add "their" while only the word "performing" is good. we add "their" and we have to add "of" and change "performing" to a noun form. this is the reason D is considered wordy.

o new kind of word is added in D, possessive " their".
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the number of - has risen (Singular subject - singular verb)

Options D and E remain.

D - sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public

sentences (plural) allow (plural) them (criminals) to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public --> Wordy, imprecise
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In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have risen dramatically.

(A) sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have
(B) sentences, performing specific jobs that benefit the public while being allowed to remain unconfined, have
(C) sentences, performing specific jobs beneficial to the public while they are allowed to remain unconfined, have
(D) sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has
(E) sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has


Imo E

A does not have correct SV agreement as we have "have"
B is not good at all here being is used wrongly here and also incorrect SVA
C changes meaning as they remain unconfined and then they do community service again incorrect SVA
D " in their performing " is wordy and wrong phrase
E correct
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am i right in discarding option D for punctuation absence??
we need a "comma" before" which "
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Answer is E.

We are talking about a "number", and numbers are always singular. Therefore, we need to use "has" to refer to number. Options A,B,C can be eliminated for using "have". D is incorrect because "in their performing" tense/structure is totally wrong.
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