In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given communi

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In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has risen dramatically.

(A) sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have

(B) sentences, performing specific jobs that benefit the public while being allowed to remain unconfined, have

(C) sentences, performing specific jobs beneficial to the public while they are allowed to remain unconfined, have

(D) sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has

(E) sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has

chetan2u · Accepted Answer

ans cannot be A,B,C because all have wrong subject-verb agrement,,,, In the last few years,  the number of  convicted criminals given community service sentences. which allow
the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public,  have  risen
dramatically. ..
 the number requires has.. D is wordy .. only E remains , however it seems the options part after "that" is missing..

GMATNinja · Answer

Yup! Just be aware that when "which" is the object of a preposition - "in which," "from which," etc. - it won't follow a comma. And the GMAT very, very rarely tests comma usage in their newer questions, so don't worry about them too much.

I hope that helps!

CrackverbalGMAT · Answer

This question is based on Subject-Verb agreement and Modifiers.

The underlined portion ends in a verb – have/has. The subject of this verb is “the number of convicted criminals”. The subject is singular, so the plural verb ‘have’ is incorrect. On this basis, Options A, B, and C can be eliminated.

In Option D, the modifier “which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public” provides extra information. However, extra information should be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. Since there are no commas separating the clause from the rest of the sentence, this option is structurally inappropriate. So, Option D can be eliminated.

In Option E, the participle modifier “allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public” is appropriate. A participle modifier modifies the word placed before it when there is no comma separating it from its subject. 
 Therefore, E is the most appropriate option.

Jayanthi Kumar.

fluke · Answer

OG 10 Reply:
At issue in this question is subject-verb agreement;   the number ... has risen   must be the kernel of the main
clause. Choice E, the best answer, uses a singular verb form,   has  , to agree with the singular subject,   the
number  . Choices A, B, and C mistake   criminals   for the sentence subject and so incorrectly use the plural verb
form   have  . In B and C the verb phrases   (performing .. . )   do not clearly modify   criminals  , because another noun 
  (sentences)   intrudes, nor do the verb phrases clearly establish temporal relationships among events. D is wordy and imprecise   (in their performing of specific jobs)  .

rajeevrks27 · Answer

+1 D ( if E is not modified in the end)
E(if sentence is as MBAhereIcome has written)
guys n gals, Kindly authenticate the sentence before posting)....

BDSunDevil · Answer

the number of  requires  has . and E looks incomplete.

dheeraj24 · Answer

The number is always Singular and requires singular verb . A,B,C --- eliminated Among D and E , in option D which does not comma before it . D ---- eliminated . Hence E

kannu44 · Answer

what is the role of "allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public "

In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has risen dramatically.

The whole sentence with correct answer looks awkward.

Thanks

EducationAisle · Answer

Hi kannu44, GMAT is basically using a pretty  long  modifier ( participial phrase , to be precise) to make this sentence  look  awkward. In the sentence below, I have underlined the intermediate modifier:

In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has risen dramatically.

So, the  core  of the sentence is:

In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals has risen dramatically.

This clearly doesn't look awkward.

In the intermediate modifier, there are many constructs, most notably:

i) Past participle phrase:  given community service sentences  
ii) Present participle phrase:  allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs  
iii) Relative clause:  that benefit the public

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EducationAisle · Answer

Isn't it essential? Sentence is not talking about  all  convicted criminals; only those who were given community service sentences.

In any case, GMAT does not really test on essentials/non-essentials.

AdityaHongunti · Answer

am i right in discarding option D for punctuation absence??
we need a "comma" before" which "

Duongluong · Answer

With POE, I can easily take A, B, C, D out, but still confused with option E: Whom 'performing specific job'? I think reasonably they are 'them'/criminals, but we dont have any precedent subject for that clause. It is usual to say that "I do A while doing B" (the precedent subject "I" applying for both clauses of the sentence), but when I re-write this clause as following, causing a little ambiguity:
 Community service sentences {allow them to remain unconfined} while {performing specific jobs} that benefit the public.

Then, I tried to rewrite it in different way to make "them" a subject for the gerund "performing", it should be like this: 
 Community service sentences allow them {to remain unconfined} while { to perform } specific jobs that benefit the public.

Can someone help me out what is problem with my thought?

generis · Answer

Duongluong , I'm not sure I understand your question. Actually, I'm sure I don't understand your question. 1) what bothers you? 2) what is it that you are trying to fix about the sentence? What is it that you want the sentence to say that it does not say? Is is possible that you are over thinking this issue? I am about to deploy too much jargon. I need to do so because the focus seems to be grammar rules. I understand the urge to find hard-and-fast rules. But you wrote that you could eliminate option D easily. Answer E is correct. Here's a productive question: What rule or rules might you be incorrectly relying upon? The subject is number. The verb is has risen. An unusually long prepositional phrase follows: of convicted criminals / given community service sentences / allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs / that benefit the public Within the prepositional phrase we have: 1) essential participial modifier = of convicted criminals 2 past participle + nouns = given community service sentences 3) present participle + pronoun + infinitive phrase = allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs 4) that clause (relative clause modifer) = that benefit the public Where did you get the idea that the object of a preposition could not be the antecedent of a pronoun? (IS this issue the one that bothers you?

) Or that a pronoun must refer to a noun that is a subject of the sentence? This is correct: The object of a preposition CAN be the antecedent of a pronoun. This is correct: A pronoun does NOT have to refer to the subject of the sentence. The object of a preposition cannot be the subject of a clause or sentence. The object of a preposition cannot simultaneously be the object of a verb. But the object of a preposition certainly CAN be an antecedent for a pronoun. The subject of the sentence is not criminals . But "criminals" IS the antecedent of "them." Look at the structure of the participial phrases. The pronoun-noun relationship is logical. Criminals are people. Sentences are not people. Sentences cannot perform jobs. The only logical antecedent of them in the long prepositional modifier is "criminals." I admire your tenacity. Keep your eyes on the bigger picture, too. You may well be doing so and I just cannot see that you are doing so because I do not understand your question.

Hope that reply helps.

himanshurajawat · Answer

What is wrong with D?

Please don't reply with 'in their performing' is awkard.

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generis · Answer

himanshurajawat  the word "which" lacks a comma before it.

Many people believe that GMAT will abandon the THAT/which distinction.
I am not so sure. 
I have never seen an officially correct answer with "which"  not  offset by commas.

The example below is one that I recall offhand in which the question explicitly tests THAT/which and the use of commas.

OG 2020 #824 (C) The OE writer: "   which was quite tense     commas   . . . this version fails rhetorically."

In British English,  which  and  that  are used interchangeably. 
Not so in U.S. English or on the GMAT.
 That  is an essential modifier. No commas.
 Which  is a nonessential modifier. It should be set off by commas.
People trained in B.E. just need to be a little careful; your eyes are used to seeing  which  without a comma before it.

Hope that helps.

Tanchat · Answer

Dear Experts, could you pls review my logic?

I guess "them" refers to criminals
their = criminals as well

In (E) "them" also refers to criminals.
Subject in "while" -clause is omitted. I guess the subject of the clause is supposed to be criminals.

I eliminate (D) because GMAT usually prefers "Verb" rather than "Noun", and (E) contains both performing (verb form) and benefit (verb form) while (D) contains performing of (noun/gerund form -> I guess it should be "performance") and beneficial is an adjective. Thus, (E) wins

AhmedMoharam89 · Answer

Can someone explain the proper usage of "which" and the "participle -ing" ?

I mean between D & E, I eliminated D because "in their performing" sounds awkward and could simple be replaced with "performing" as in choice E.

someone pointed out that "which" when used as a modifier must be preceded by a comma.

so if choice D were " sentences which allow..." it would be correct?

I know that the use of both "which" and "participle -ing" is to modify the subject, but is there anything else?

Mavisdu1017 · Answer

Hello expert,
Would you like yo throw some light on this question? I saw some people said there needs to be a comma before WHICH clause, but this explanation can not convince me. 
Also, I feel there is a problem on E: “sentences allowing them to remain unconfined WHILE performing specific jobs”, there is an omission of subject in WHILE clause, so this means the subject will be the same as the preceding sentence, so the subject should be “community service sentences”. But if so, the meaning is illogical: while community service sentences perform specific jobs.
Eg: Tim is reading while eating. Here the omitted subject in WHILE clause should be “Tim”: Tim is reading while (Tim) is eating.
So confused...Pls help on this expert, and much thanks.

MartyTargetTestPrep · Answer

First, let's eliminate (D):

(D) sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has

The main issue with this choice is the wording "remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs."

That wording doesn't effectively convey a logical meaning. After, the idea that someone would remain unconfined in performing a job doesn't make sense since there's no way to be unconfined or confined in performing a job. A person could be confined or unconfined WHILE performing a job, but not IN performing a job.

Now, let's consider (E).

(E) sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has

The reduced clause "while performing ..." in (E) modifies "them to remain unconfined," and thus, "them" is the agent of "performing."

So, the meaning conveyed by the (E) version makes sense.

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