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Q1. While depressed property values can hurt some large investors, they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose equity - in many cases representing a life’s savings - can plunge or even disappear. (A) they are potentially devastating for homeowners, whose (B) they can potentially devastate homeowners in that their (C) for homeowners they are potentially devastating, because their (D) for homeowners, it is potentially devastating in that their (E) it can potentially devastate homeowners, whose Difficulty - Hard
E seems correct.
A - (1) Pronoun issue - The subordinate clause is in passive voice to make it difficult for us to recognize that "they" can refer to both depressed property values and investors. Even though "they" is near to investors in passive voice we may think it has a proper antecedent because it is logical for they to refer to values but that is incorrect.
(2) Active voice issue - Make the sentense in active voice "While some large investors can get hurt by depressed property values, they are potentially devastating for homeowners..." and we can see that they (subject of main clause) is not parallel to large investors in terms of difference/contrast. We want to contrast homeowners to investors, not investors to depressed values, depressed values are common to both (it is the cause).
(3) Meaning issue - "While" is used to contrast ideas in this sentence so subordinate clause must have the same certainty or uncertainty as main clause. Can conveys possibility while are conveys certainty. Structure x, Meaning x. Can eliminate A.
B - (1) Pronoun issue - they reasoning same as above, their - ambiguity as it could refer to investors or homeowners, (2) Active voice issue - same reasoning as in A.
C - (1) Pronoun issue - their ambiguity, (2) Active voice issue - same reasoning as A - Some large investors are getting compared to "for" homeowners.
D - (1) Pronoun issue, (2) Active voice issue - same reasoning as in C, (3) No main clause - While makes the first clause a subordinate clause and the part "it is potentially devastating in.." is not even a complete sentence therefore no main clause. Starting from that is a subordinate clause too.
E - (1) Active voice - When the first sentence is written in active voice, we can clealy see "it"’s antecedent is "depressed values". While some large investors can get hurt by depressed property values, it can potentially devastate homeowners..."
(2) Pronoun - whose modifies homeowners correctly because it is placed near to the modified noun. Structure ✓, Meaning ✓.
Therefore, option E is the correct answer.
mialanknox
E seems correct. A - (1) Pronoun issue - The subordinate clause is in passive voice to make it difficult for us to recognize that "they" can refer to both depressed property values and investors. Even though "they" is near to investors in passive voice we may think it has a proper antecedent because it is logical for they to refer to values but that is incorrect. (2) Active voice issue - Make the sentense in active voice "While some large investors can get hurt by depressed property values, they are potentially devastating for homeowners..." and we can see that they (subject of main clause) is not parallel to large investors in terms of difference/contrast. We want to contrast homeowners to investors, not investors to depressed values, depressed values are common to both (it is the cause). (3) Meaning issue - "While" is used to contrast ideas in this sentence so subordinate clause must have the same certainty or uncertainty as main clause. Can conveys possibility while are conveys certainty. Structure x, Meaning x. Can eliminate A. B - (1) Pronoun issue - they reasoning same as above, their - ambiguity as it could refer to investors or homeowners, (2) Active voice issue - same reasoning as in A. C - (1) Pronoun issue - their ambiguity, (2) Active voice issue - same reasoning as A - Some large investors are getting compared to "for" homeowners. D - (1) Pronoun issue, (2) Active voice issue - same reasoning as in C, (3) No main clause - While makes the first clause a subordinate clause and the part "it is potentially devastating in.." is not even a complete sentence therefore no main clause. Starting from that is a subordinate clause too. E - (1) Active voice - When the first sentence is written in active voice, we can clealy see "it"’s antecedent is "depressed values". While some large investors can get hurt by depressed property values, it can potentially devastate homeowners..." (2) Pronoun - whose modifies homeowners correctly because it is placed near to the modified noun. Structure ✓, Meaning ✓. Therefore, option E is the correct answer.
Oops, sorry. Wrong answer E and wrong reasoning for A. Please ignore 🙏.