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Just because King Alfred occupied and fortified London in 886 did not mean that he also won the loyalty of its citizens: the invading Danes were well aware of this weakness and used it to their advantage in 893.
(A) Just because King Alfred occupied and fortified London in 886 did not mean that he
(B) The fact that King Alfred had occupied and fortified London in 886 did not mean that he had
(C) Just because King Alfred occupied and fortified London in 886, it did not mean he
(D) The fact that King Alfred occupied and fortified London in 886, it did not mean that he
(E) Just because King Alfred had occupied and fortified London in 886, it did not mean he
I got this question wrong!
Will write down my thought process so you may avoid my mistakes!
Meaning -
2 actions took place in the following order-
i) King occupied and fortified
ii) Did not win loyalty of people
Mistake Number 1 : Skimmed through the text in the colon because who cares about stuff in colon.
Because of my above mistake, I was focused only on finding an option that added a past perfect before the first action.
(A) Just because King Alfred occupied and fortified London in 886 did not mean that he
I did not like Option (A) because of the tense error.
Mistake Number 2 : Thought "Just because King Alfred occupied and fortified London in 886" was the subject.
Even though, it is pretty logical if you take a second and ask yourself, "Can the above phrase perform the action 'did not mean'?"
Eliminated
Option (A)(B) The fact that King Alfred had occupied and fortified London in 886 did not mean that he had
I saw "had" twice and rolled my eyes. How can these 2 actions happen at the same time in the past. We clearly want to sequence the events.
Eliminated
Option (B)(C) Just because King Alfred occupied and fortified London in 886, it did not mean he As
GMATNinja says, "Eliminate the definite errors" and this error was one.
"it" cannot refer to an entire clause.
We can safely eliminate
Option (C)(D) The fact that King Alfred occupied and fortified London in 886, it did not mean that he I saw the same error in Option (D) and I was like "lol, what an easy elimination".
Eliminate
Option (D). I guess Option (E) is our answer.
(E) Just because King Alfred had occupied and fortified London in 886, it did not mean he
Wtf why is there an "it" here too. I hate GMAT lol.
Eliminate
Option (E)Now we are back at Option (A) and Option (B).
So I looked back at Option (A) and thought. Hmm, maybe the order is pretty clear we can do with the same tense for both the actions.
But then why the hell do we need "had" when simple past is much cleaner.
Mistake Number 1 made me eliminate Option (B) and mark Option (A).
Never again will I ignore text in a colon.
Takeawaysi) “it”
cannot refer to the whole clause it must only refer to
a noun. So using “the fact” is much clearer
ii) Whenever a subject is not in the standard noun form and you are unsure what the subject is ask yourself “Is the supposed subject doing the action?”
iii) Do not ignore text in colon. Verb Tense of the clause after the colon can determine the verb tense of the main clause.
Thanks for reading!