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My tough pick among A, D and E is A

Marshal Zhu De, commander of the Communist armies that conquered China, is so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes that a memorial room was built for him in the Mao Zedong mausoleum.

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A) so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes that a memorial room was


so + adj /adv + that : if the emphasis is on a quality described by an adjective, then it's more compact and stylistically better to write "so + adj + that"


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B) so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes as to have a memorial room that was


Distorts the meaning by giving an impression that Marshal Zhu De possessed memorial room


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C) so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes for a memorial room to be


so + adj /adv + for : not a correct idiom/structure

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D) revered enough in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes that a memorial room was

Enough means to such a degree:
Nothin wrong gametically in this option, but this sentence gives an impression that there is some measurable level of reverence that will help in deciding whether to build memorial room


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E) revered enough in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes for a memorial room to be

This option is the rephrasing of option (D) using a different syntax: nothing wrong gametically but meaning is not as intended
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The sentence can be reduced to -

Marshal Zhu De is so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes that a memorial room was built for him in the Mao Zedong mausoleum.

It implies that
Marshal's quality of being revered was the reason for the fact that a memorial room was built for him.
The above sentence does not have any grammatical issue.

Let's look at the choices -
A) so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes that a memorial room was
Look right. Hold on with it.
B) so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes as to have a memorial room that was
This choice distorts the meaning.
Marshal's quality of being revered was the reason for the fact that he had a memorial room (that was built in the Mao Zedong mausoleum).

C) so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes for a memorial room to be
Marshal is so revered to be built - This is nonsensical.
When we say : X is something to be Y ... , we mean X itself is likely to be Y.
Marshal was not built.

D) revered enough in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes that a memorial room was
Grammatically correct.
However, this choice changes the meaning by implying as if there is a criteria for building a memorial room.
If one qualifies that criteria, a memorial room is built for the one.

E) revered enough in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes for a memorial room to be
Same as choice C.

IMO A
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Marshal Zhu De, commander of the Communist armies that conquered China, is so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes that a memorial room was built for him in the Mao Zedong mausoleum.

A) so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes that a memorial room was
No Error. Correct

B) so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes as to have a memorial room that was
Marshal Zhu De is so revered as to have a memorial room...doesn't make sense...meaning error

C) so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes for a memorial room to be
Marshal Zhu De is so revered for a memorial room to be...doesn't make sense....meaning error

D) revered enough in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes that a memorial room was
Although enough A that B is Idiomatic. But A and B are not parallel in this case.

E) revered enough in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes for a memorial room to be
enough...For..unidiomatic.
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Re: Marshal Zhu De commander of the Communist armies that conquered China [#permalink]
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Marshal Zhu De, commander of the Communist armies that conquered China, is so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes that a memorial room was built for him in the Mao Zedong mausoleum.


A) so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes that a memorial room was
The meaning is perfect therefore let us hang on to it

B) so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes as to have a memorial room that was
as to have addition in the sentence makes it akward therefore out

C) so revered in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes for a memorial room to be
for is akward placement therefore out

D) revered enough in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes that a memorial room was
placement so before revered iss necessary and enough isn't the right usage hence out

E) revered enough in the pantheon of revolutionary heroes for a memorial room to be
Similar reasoning as C and D

Therefore IMO A
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