Need help with profile evaluation

Hi,

I need some help to evaluate my profile, and I need suggestions on which colleges to apply to

Profile Details:

GMAT Score: 690(86)
Q: 49(77)
V: 35(76)
IR: 6(69)
AWA: 5

School:
10th std: CGPA 9 on 10
12th std: 83%

College:
Completed a Bachelor's in Commerce degree from Symbiosis College of arts and commerce (Affiliated to Pune University)
Score: 79.03% (O Grade)

Nationality: Indian (Female)

Internship:
-Goldman Sachs Operations Division for 2 months

Full time work:
-Received a PPO from Goldman Sachs and have been working as a Financial Operations analyst for 1.5 years now.
Working with the trade management team. Responsibility- Risk management; reconciliation; checks on trader activity; client confirmation notices; checking accuracy of internal data etc

Social Work:
-Worked at an NGO for sex workers for 3 months
-Taught under privileged children Math and Science for a month

-Participated in various financial donations as well as donations of clothes and toys etc over the years

-Cleaned a Lake and planted trees as part of the Goldman CTW initiative

-Participated in teaching children from weak Financial background about the basic skills required for vegetable carving as the same can be pursued as a viable business.

School/ College Activities:

-Have been involved in dance performances on School annual cultural gatherings
-Have been involved in various organising roles:
-Organised the College festival with a team of 50 people
-Helped organise a college contingent of 40 to travel to another city for competitions and back
-Helped organise a play performed by renounced artists from Mumbai
-Helped organise the annual intercultural festival with affiliated German students for 3 years in college.

-Amongst all these activities, addressed the croud as well at various occasions

-Participated in extempore competitions and won 3rd prize in 11th grade.

Goals:

Want to pursue a career in the financial or consulting/management strategies sector.

Target Colleges:

1. NYU Stern
2. CMU Tepper
3. Virginia- Darden
4. Georgetown Mcdonough
5.UNC Kenan Flagler
6.Rochester- Simon
7.Indian School of business
8. UCLA
9. Ross

Please Suggest which other colleges I can apply to

Also, I am from the army background which meant moving from a place to the other frequently. This has helped mold me as a person and I think helps my candidacy as an MBA student as forming relationships/communication/good leadership skills are inculcated in me because of the examples I have had around while growing up.

Please highlight my strengths and weaknesses which I could address in my essays. Looking forward to your responses
Thanks in advance!