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Re: Noun modifier exception Touch rule [#permalink]
I want to take this chance to say some point I already said but do not get full comment/explanation

"which clause" can modify slightly far noun. you can find an article on this by e gmat.

noun-modifiers-can-modify-slightly-far-away-noun-135868-20.html

but in og questions this case is considered an error. the following, question 48, og 13 show this

It is called a sea, but the landlocked Caspian is
actually the largest lake on Earthf whichcovers more
than four times the surface area of its closest rival in
size, North America's Lake Superior.
(A) It is called a sea, but the landlocked Caspian is
actually the largest lake on Earth, which covers
(B) Although it is called a sea, actually the
landlocked Caspian is the largest lake on Earth,
which covers
(C) Though called a sea, the landlocked Caspian is
actually the largest lake on Earth, covering
(D) Though called a sea but it actually is the largest
lake on Earth, the landlocked Caspian covers
(E) Despite being called a sea, the largest lake on
Earth is actually the landlocked Caspian, covering

what I want to say that "which clause" modifying far noun is considered acceptable sometimes and unacceptable other times. from this I conclude that "which clause" modifying far noun is consider INFERIOR. This mean if we have better choice, we consider it wrong.

is my thinking correct?
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Re: Noun modifier exception Touch rule [#permalink]
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The way I would appraoch it is

A pioneer Journalist, Nellie Bly's exploits included circling the globe faster than Jules Verne's fictional Phileas Fogg.

A. A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly's exploits included
Modifier error. pioneer journalist should modify Nelly Bly. Here the statement says Nellie Bly's exploits is pioneer journalist.

B. The exploits of Nellie Bly, a pioneer journalist, included
CORRECT answer. The suject here is 'exploits' and verb is 'included'. pioneer journalist modifies Nelly Bly.

c. Nellie Bly was a pioneer journalist including in her exploits the
Here -ing modifier including modifies journalist which is non-sensical.

D. Included in the pioneer journalist Nellie Bly's exploits are
this is a inverted structure. circling the globe faster than Jules Verne's fictional Phileas Fogg is included in pioneer journalist Nellie Bly's exploits. Incorrect verb usage.

E. The pioneer journalist's exploits of Nellie Bly included
Rhetorical construction. Hre it non sensically states that pioneer journalist and Nellie Bly are separate people.
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