Hey Sujay
Sorry to hear your bad news...
For my personal expression essay, I did not do anything terribly creative; all I did was answer the question the best I could. My essay used somewhat less formal prose than my others and talked about experiences in my first job and how they still embody who I am today. My description sounds kind of corny but I don't think the essay itself turned out that way. The message gave me an opportunity to be somewhat humble (my first job was a cashier/deli clerk at 16) and to talk about what I learned, the people I met, etc.
I think a lot of people get too caught up in the "Feel free to be creative" part and forget that the question itself is quite simple: how would you like to describe yourself to others.
Believe me when I tell you, I deliberated on message, style, form, and substance literally for months before one day (in September mind you) I just sat down and wrote a story about this experience. From that, I polished it into an effective essay. I did not mention how I "fit" with Stern (as Beagles mentioned in his post) though it would make sense to do so in hindsight.
Would love to hear what others did for this essay...
sujayb
Congrats JustSayin !! Bravo !!
Did you do anything different in Essay 3 that might give some hint whether my essay was responsible for my ding at LangOne Spring 2008 ?