Hey Sujay
Sorry to hear your bad news...
For my personal expression essay, I did not do anything terribly creative; all I did was answer the question the best I could. My essay used somewhat less formal prose than my others and talked about experiences in my first job and how they still embody who I am today. My description sounds kind of corny but I don't think the essay itself turned out that way. The message gave me an opportunity to be somewhat humble (my first job was a cashier/deli clerk at 16) and to talk about what I learned, the people I met, etc.
I think a lot of people get too caught up in the "Feel free to be creative" part and forget that the question itself is quite simple: how would you like to describe yourself to others.
Believe me when I tell you, I deliberated on message, style, form, and substance literally for months before one day (in September mind you) I just sat down and wrote a story about this experience. From that, I polished it into an effective essay. I did not mention how I "fit" with Stern (as Beagles mentioned in his post) though it would make sense to do so in hindsight.
Would love to hear what others did for this essay...
sujayb wrote:
Congrats JustSayin !! Bravo !!
Did you do anything different in Essay 3 that might give some hint whether my essay was responsible for my ding at LangOne Spring 2008 ?