It totally depends on what your answer to "What matters most" is. For many people, it's not something that involves what they do in their professional career -- for others, it is. So I would caution you to not worry about what others have done because that will likely steer you in the wrong direction if you're trying to "be like" other successful responses.
You have to be true to yourself. The essay does NOT have to be inspirational/"lovey-dovey" at all -- it should reflect your honest answer and your personality. I assure you that I have seen successful candidates run the entire gamut of tones and topics, but the one thing that they had in common was authenticity and self-awareness. The adcom can smell BS from a mile away. If something related to your work is what matters most and you're usually a fairly serious person, do NOT try to be something you're not. Diversity in the classroom comes in many ways, including diversity in personalities,
so be yourself.
Good luck!
latempo wrote:
SBCErikaOlson wrote:
The GSB adcom is looking for doers. So whichever thing you have done more about/taken the most action on to prove that it really is the thing that matters most to you, pick that one!
Hope that helps!
Hi Erika,
To follow up on this, I was wondering how much of the essay should be focused on 'why' and how much should be focused on 'examples'. Some of the essays I've read on Medium and from books answer this question by barely mentioning anything career/business related or not at all. Many talk about family background, childhood events, or a hobby for 95% of the essay. The way that I've currently set up my essay is 30% on the 'why' and 70% on the examples and the future, which I feel is too professionally focused not feel-good/inspirational/lovey-dovey enough.
What are your thoughts on that?
Thanks!