The following appeared in an advertising brochure carried by ChromeChannel Communication salespeople:
Quote:
Pay-per-click web advertising is the best investment an advertiser can make. In the eighteen months since MacDowell's halved its television advertising and doubled its web advertising, its sales have grown by nearly 30% and it has opened forty more stores to keep up with demand. This is just one example of the fact that television advertising is on its way out, and smart businesses will continue to up their investment in pay-per-click ads.
Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. In your discussion be sure to analyze the line of reasoning and the use of evidence in the argument. For example, you may need to consider what questionable assumptions underlie the thinking and what alternative explanations or counterexamples might weaken the conclusion. You can also discuss what sort of evidence would strengthen or refute the argument, what changes in the argument would make it more logically sound, and what, if anything, would help you better evaluate its conclusion.The argument says that
Pay pay-per-click advertising is
best compared to television advertising, you cant use 'best' when talking about 2 things. It should be 'better' and
explains the same taking, AWA writing must be formal. You are using an informal way of writing here. "explain the same" is informal. Alternate way is to mention "justifies the reasoning by citing the example of.." an example of MacDowell's
case, redundant for a duration of 18 months. The argument seems to indicate that since MacDowell has grown by a vast amount once it doubled the web advertising, the same strategy can be applied for
Chrome-channel Communication, issue at hand is not chrome channel communication but caters to the difference between the pay-per-click and television advertisements.
This argument cannot sound good enough for the following reasons, bad way to end the paragraph. You can mention "Mentioned this way, the argument fails to provide sufficient justification for the conclusion and thus leads to mistaken assumptions and logical flaws.
Primarily,
Any, any market will contain plenty of options and
the argument does not mention any advertising methods other than TV and web. So assuming that
Web, web advertising is
the best without analysing the other options is not a good strategy. We have plenty of other advertising methods such as
Paper, paper advertising,
Poster, poster. How is paper adv. different from poster? advertisements etc.
A weak paragraph. Always end your flaw paragraphs with something that will show that you have CRITICALLY analysed the flaw by talking about a possible way to alleviate this particular flaw.Secondarily, you can use better transition words than primarily/secondarily etc by using Furthermore, Moreover, In addition to... etc, the author considers the case of MacDowell and opines that since it halved its television advertising and doubled its web advertising, its sales have grown and resulted in opening of forty more stores. He assumes success is because of increasing investment in web advertising but does not consider other factors that occurred in the same
(same what?), try to avoid ellipses in AWA. Mention everything clearly or
before 18 months, 18 months before.
There can be many external factors as for instance the increase in sales and opportunities could have resulted because of the TV advertisements [color=#ed1c24]itself, themselves however little amount is invested, subject-verb pair is not correct. Entire sentence needs to be rewritten[/color]. There is no supporting information so as to
inform, you can use better words ---> analyse/evaluate etc. why the author makes the causal argument.
(Again, end this paragraph by talking about what would be a way to remove this flaw).Thirdly,
One, one cannot make perfect analysis by considering just one example and assume that television advertising is on its way out, and smart businesses will continue to up their investment in pay-per-click
ads, no non-standard abbreviations. The reality can be much different and TV advertising may sustain by throwing the
ads in between famous TV
soaps, sopa operas or programs thereby gaining attention of the viewers. The web advertising does have
no sustain as the viewers
who do not to get disturbed by
adds may opt for ad-blocking softwares
that may ruin the plans of the
Communication, communication channel if implemented.
Finally,
As, as per the above mentioned considerations, the argument does not look strong enough to make
an positive impact on sales of the
Channel. advertisement. The argument
is to, should be reconsidered after
through, a thorough review of all existing advertising media and their impact on
customers. Since, what applies for, to one need not apply
to everyone, the channel needs to have its own strategy weighing all its factors and taking cases of similar channels for more information.