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Thanks for sharing your story. You have a really nice profile with your GPA, GMAT, and work experience. You are in range for these schools and can be competitive. These schools however attract the best and brightest so you will need some secret sauce to get you over the top so make sure you really knock the essays out fo the park and highlight what makes you a unique candidate to maximize your chance
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Hi, I would really appreciate some insight into my profile.

I am 28-years old, born in one of the East Asian countries but raised in the US (US Citizen), and attended elementary~college in the US (top 10 public west-coast university).

GPA: 3.57/4.0
GMAT: 730(49Q/40V/8IR/5.5AWA)
College: Top 10 public west-coast university. Majored in Finance
Work experience: Came back to East Asia to re-experience the culture here and get a different/new perspective professionally. Worked for 1.5 years at a major East Asian consumer retail company in the in-house Mergers and Acquisitions team. Traveled abroad extensively for meetings with ownership groups of acquisition targets. Took part in numerous deals with two successful deals (one being a ~$200 cross-border acquisition). Moved to a Big 4 firm in East Asia to the Transaction Services team to really learn the technical aspects of deal execution (modelling, etc.) and have been working here for 3 years for a total of ~4.5 years in East Asia (took part in numerous cross-border deals, albeit small to mid in size)
Extra-curriculars: Volunteer English teacher at local church. Member of basketball club/group at current company. Sometimes take part in volunteer activities sponsored by company.
Why MBA: Looking to leverage my unique experience in a buy-side/in-house M&A team, and a FAS firm to go back to the US to get into the private equity industry focusing on consumer retail.
I'm looking to apply to the top-tier (4 or 5 out of the M7) schools, especially the strong finance schools that would give me the networking/knowledge/credentials to ultimately help me get into the PE industry.

Thank you so much in advance, I would really appreciate some constructive feedback. Any and all comments are welcome!

The basics are definitely all there so I have no improvements to suggest really, the only thing missing - as already stated by others - it something unique that separates you from other similar candidates. So is there a compelling back story or something of that kind here? It’s kind of hard to tell just based on the hard facts you presented, but it can often make all the difference when it comes to admission.

Feel free to be in touch if you’d like to brainstorm some ideas related to that, ARINGO offers free consultations, and: good luck!
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Thank you all for the insightful feedback, I will have to focus heavily on my essays.

Also as a side question, will it be a negative factor if I write about my goal as being PE without prior PE experience?
Or since I actually do have experience in FAS and a unique strategic investor-side M&A experience, would it "make sense"?
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Last year I got a similarly over-represented candidate with no PE experience into Wharton, and we wrote about about his PE goals. We did write about his banking background, and also demonstrated that he was very networked. I think it helped that he actually articulated the four areas where he felt he needed to develop in order to become a good candidate for a private-equity job. And then we stated what he would do, see or be at Wharton in order to obtain the relevant experience, the strengthening his candidacy for a PE job.

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Hi, I would really appreciate some insight into my profile.

I am 28-years old, born in one of the East Asian countries but raised in the US (US Citizen), and attended elementary~college in the US (top 10 public west-coast university).

GPA: 3.57/4.0
GMAT: 730(49Q/40V/8IR/5.5AWA)
College: Top 10 public west-coast university. Majored in Finance
Work experience: Came back to East Asia to re-experience the culture here and get a different/new perspective professionally. Worked for 1.5 years at a major East Asian consumer retail company in the in-house Mergers and Acquisitions team. Traveled abroad extensively for meetings with ownership groups of acquisition targets. Took part in numerous deals with two successful deals (one being a ~$200 cross-border acquisition). Moved to a Big 4 firm in East Asia to the Transaction Services team to really learn the technical aspects of deal execution (modelling, etc.) and have been working here for 3 years for a total of ~4.5 years in East Asia (took part in numerous cross-border deals, albeit small to mid in size)
Extra-curriculars: Volunteer English teacher at local church. Member of basketball club/group at current company. Sometimes take part in volunteer activities sponsored by company.
Why MBA: Looking to leverage my unique experience in a buy-side/in-house M&A team, and a FAS firm to go back to the US to get into the private equity industry focusing on consumer retail.
I'm looking to apply to the top-tier (4 or 5 out of the M7) schools, especially the strong finance schools that would give me the networking/knowledge/credentials to ultimately help me get into the PE industry.

Thank you so much in advance, I would really appreciate some constructive feedback. Any and all comments are welcome!
Certainly I think you have the stats to be competitive anywhere. It will depend on how well you do with your applications- since R2 deadlines are fast approaching one thing you could do is have a counselor with strong depth review your essays before you hit send- you'd want someone with very specific school knowledge on Wharton, for example- to review Wharton, a CBS counselor for Columbia etc- We can do this for you as our counselors represent all the top programs. An hour or two total could make sure you are presenting yourself in the best light for each program. Here's a link where you can learn more and get 5% off any services:
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Hi there,

Thanks for sharing your background with us. While your work experience may be solid, it isn't as unique as you might think. The way to position your story to stand out is going to be to illustrate your leadership capacity as this is a quality that all top schools will be looking for. Further, you'll want to demonstrate your passion for the work you want to do. When I read through the information you shared, everything is a bit disjointed. Surely, a forum isn't the easiest place to share a cohesive background, but if you're struggling to put together a compelling argument for why you are the best candidate to achieve your goals, we'd love to chat about how we can position your candidacy. Feel free to sign up for a free consultation below. Best of luck!
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Your profile is a fit for the top programs, and your international experience will play well amongst these schools as well. I think the key to a successful application for you will be your ability to stand out from the pack and curate a unique and compelling narrative. You seem to have some of the elements it is just about tying together