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Re: Profile Evaluation - Minority Female, Early Career Applicant [#permalink]
As you know, there is no "right" or "preferred" way of writing well. Even with b-school essays.

What is most important is conveying your story in a clear, specific, economical and compelling way. That could be done in a traditional expository or descriptive way (which is what most applicants default to), or in a more narrative "slice of life" manner. In my opinion, writing in a narrative "slice of life" manner (probably what you did) is what I prefer, but it also requires a much more skilled writer to be able to "show and not tell" because your thesis and argument is often conveyed as subtext, which then puts the onus on the reader to make the appropriate inferences. In the hands of a less than skilled writer, it can be a disaster -- gimmicky, unclear, and even insincere because it becomes too cute for its own sake.

Anyhow, you've done all you could and now it's just the waiting game!
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Re: Profile Evaluation - Minority Female, Early Career Applicant [#permalink]
Ahh yes, waiting -sigh- but I suppose Round 3 is also an option if I get dinged.
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Re: Profile Evaluation - Minority Female, Early Career Applicant [#permalink]
Welp, I didn't get into most of the schools I applied to but I won't have to reapply in the fall. I got admitted to MIT and waitlisted at Yale and W. Thanks for your help!
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Re: Profile Evaluation - Minority Female, Early Career Applicant [#permalink]
Congrats!!!
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Re: Profile Evaluation - Minority Female, Early Career Applicant [#permalink]
Thanks!
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