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Drawing on her roots in a society that has a strong tradition of story-telling and oral renditions of the past, Indian writer Suniti Namjoshi incorporates many types of literature into her writing: including historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian as well as European sources.

A. writing: including historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian as well as
B. writing: historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and
C. writing: these include historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and
D. writing, which includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from Indian as well as
E. writing that includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from Indian and
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I go with Option B.

But not sure why option E is wrong. Can you please explain?
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I go with Option B.

But not sure why option E is wrong. Can you please explain?


"Both from X and Y" makes no sense
It should be
From "Both X and Y" this is correct idiom that is error in E
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rohith2reddy wrote:
I go with Option B.

But not sure why option E is wrong. Can you please explain?


E is wrong because of the lack of parallelism in the later part of the sentence. In Both X And Y, X and Y have to be parallel. From after both disturbs the || within X and Y.
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Drawing on her roots in a society that has a strong tradition of story-telling and oral renditions of the past, Indian writer Suniti Namjoshi incorporates many types of literature into her writing: including historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian as well as European sources.

A. writing: including historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian as well as
B. writing: historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and
C. writing: these include historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and
D. writing, which includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from Indian as well as
E. writing that includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from Indian and



A. writing: including historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian as well as
Both X as well as Y is wrong. Both X and Y is correct idiom.

B. writing: historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and
Correct answer. After colon, " historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and European sources." correctly provides further explanation for what comes before it i.e. types of literature.

C. writing: these include historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and
Pronoun error. "These" may ambiguously refer to both "story-telling and oral renditions" and "types of literature".

D. writing, which includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from Indian as well as
Incorrect idiom as discussed in A. Also, Option D incorrectly describes that writing includes.... whereas those refers to types of literature.

E. writing that includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from Indian and
Same as explained in D. Incorrect.
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Drawing on her roots in a society that has a strong tradition of story-telling and oral renditions of the past, Indian writer Suniti Namjoshi incorporates many types of literature into her writing: including historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian as well as European sources.

A. writing: including historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian as well as
B. writing: historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and
C. writing: these include historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and
D. writing, which includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from Indian as well as
E. writing that includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from Indian and
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Drawing on her roots in a society that has a strong tradition of story-telling and oral renditions of the past, Indian writer Suniti Namjoshi incorporates many types of literature into her writing: including historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian as well as European sources.

A. writing: including historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian as well as
B. writing: historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and
C. writing: these include historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and
D. writing, which includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from Indian as well as
E. writing that includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from Indian and



Will go for B...
1. both X and Y,,,,x and y should be parallel
2. part after colon can be an extra description of the preceding clause and neednt be a full sentence....

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rohith2reddy wrote:
I go with Option B.

But not sure why option E is wrong. Can you please explain?


A typical use of parallelism thumbrule once out, twice in.

If a word is outside a parallel structure, use once ( i.e. it covers both the elements of the parallel structure.)
If a word is inside a parallel structure, use twice ( i.e. once in each of the elements.)

Hence,
CORRECT...FROM both (X) and (Y). (The word "from" is outside the parallel structure "both X and Y" and hence covers both X and Y.)
CORRECT...both (FROM X) and (FROM Y). (The word "from" is inside the structure and hence should be used for each element of the parallel structure.)
WRONG... both (FROM X) and (Y). (Parallelism is lost - "from X" and "Y" are not parallel.)
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rohith2reddy wrote:
I go with Option B.

But not sure why option E is wrong. Can you please explain?


A typical use of parallelism thumbrule once out, twice in.

If a word is outside a parallel structure, use once ( i.e. it covers both the elements of the parallel structure.)
If a word is inside a parallel structure, use twice ( i.e. once in each of the elements.)

Hence,
CORRECT...FROM both (X) and (Y). (The word "from" is outside the parallel structure "both X and Y" and hence covers both X and Y.)
CORRECT...both (FROM X) and (FROM Y). (The word "from" is inside the structure and hence should be used for each element of the parallel structure.)
WRONG... both (FROM X) and (Y). (Parallelism is lost - "from X" and "Y" are not parallel.)


Hi carcass,

Thanks for posting the above explanation.
But,I did not understand how this is used in parallelism questions , particularly this one.

Could you perhaps elaborate with a sentence example.



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sayantanc2k wrote:
rohith2reddy wrote:
I go with Option B.

But not sure why option E is wrong. Can you please explain?


A typical use of parallelism thumbrule once out, twice in.

If a word is outside a parallel structure, use once ( i.e. it covers both the elements of the parallel structure.)
If a word is inside a parallel structure, use twice ( i.e. once in each of the elements.)

Hence,
CORRECT...FROM both (X) and (Y). (The word "from" is outside the parallel structure "both X and Y" and hence covers both X and Y.)
CORRECT...both (FROM X) and (FROM Y). (The word "from" is inside the structure and hence should be used for each element of the parallel structure.)
WRONG... both (FROM X) and (Y). (Parallelism is lost - "from X" and "Y" are not parallel.)


Hi carcass,

Thanks for posting the above explanation.
But,I did not understand how this is used in parallelism questions , particularly this one.

Could you perhaps elaborate with a sentence example.



Thanks :)


Consider the following 3 sentences:
1. I am addicted to both wine and swine.
2. I am addicted both to wine and to swine.
3. I am addicted both to wine and swine.

1. Correct: I am addicted to [both wine and swine]... the preposition "to" is outside the parallel structure, hence used once.

2. Correct: I am addicted [both to wine and to swine]... the preposition "to" is inside the parallel structure, hence used twice, once in each element.

3. Wrong: I am addicted [both to wine and swine]... the preposition "to" is inside the parallel structure, but used once - parellelism lost.
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Sorry that I'm late to the party on this one! My wife went into labor about two hours before this question was posted, and... well, I've been a little bit distracted. It turns out that caring for a newborn may or may not be more difficult than teaching sentence correction. ;)

We also covered this question in a recent YouTube webinar on punctuation, so if you prefer your explanations in video form, feel free to head over here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JLAJ_drP8UM. The short version: don't overthink colons! All they do is introduce some sort of example, but I've never seen an official GMAT question that really requires you to worry about the nuances of colon usage. In the explanation below, you'll notice that there's no real reason to worry about the specifics of colon usage -- you can do just fine by focusing on other things.

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A. writing: including historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian as well as

The first thing that should jump out at you here is the word "both". For starters, it doesn't seem quite right to use "both" with "as well as." "Both" and "and" go much better together.

We can also complain about the use of the word "including" after the colon. There's absolutely no need for it, since the colon basically implies that a list of examples is about to begin. More on that in a moment.

Anyway, we can eliminate (A).

Let's line (B) and (C) up side-by-side, to make the differences clearer:
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B. writing: historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and
C. writing: these include historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes from both Indian and

We're all good with the parallelism here: "both" and "and" need to be followed by two parallel elements. In both (B) and (C), we have: "both Indian and European..." The other bit of parallelism looks fine, too: "historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes..."

So the only difference is the inclusion of the phrase "these include." You could think of this in two ways: first, the colon already does the work of introducing examples, so "these include" is unnecessary. The second is simpler: even if you completely ignore the colon, you really can't come up with a good rationale for including the phrase "these include", since the meaning of the sentence is 100% clear without it. Basically, it's just extra words -- and since those "extra words" are the only difference between (B) and (C), you could just eliminate (C).

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D. writing, which includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from Indian as well as

Several problems here: "both" doesn't play nicely with "as well as", and even if it did, the parallelism would still be a problem: "both from Indian as well as European..." Nope.

Plus, the "which" is really, really silly, because it implies that Namjoshi's writing includes historical texts, legends, and nursery rhymes -- and that's not the intended meaning at all. Those things are influences on her writing, not types of writing that Namjoshi engages in herself.

So lots of reasons to ditch (D).

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E. writing that includes historical texts, legends, and even nursery rhymes both from Indian and

This has exactly the same errors as (D), just with some different window-dressing: "both from Indian and European..." is not parallel, and using "that" still suggests that Namjoshi's writing itself includes historical texts, legends, and nursery rhymes. And again, that's not the intended meaning of the sentence: those are just influences on her writing.

So (E) is out, and (B) is our winner. And we didn't really even need to think all that hard about colons.
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