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# QOTD: Tholonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a

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Verbal Question of The Day: Day 191: Sentence Correction

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Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in stride-piano tradition of Willi (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

(A) Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted

(B) Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

(C) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted

(D) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted

(E) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body work rooted both

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02 Jan 2018, 04:05
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This is one of my favorites, just because I see a lot of errors on it – but it’s actually really straightforward, and is easy to solve if you follow a couple of simple rules. And that doesn’t happen as often as we’d like on GMAT SC, unfortunately.

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A. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted

OK, the thing that should jump out at us is the word “both.” In this case, “both” is paired with the word “and” – and this is a very strict parallelism “trigger”. The word “both” and the word “and” must be followed by two parallel elements.

And in this case, we don’t have those parallel elements: “…both rooted… and Duke Ellington…” Nope: “rooted” is an adjective in this situation, and “Duke Ellington” definitely is not. So we can eliminate (A).

(And for anybody who was paying extremely close attention in our YouTube webinar on parallelism and meaning: when I mentioned “special parallel triggers”, this both/and construction is one of the most important examples I had in mind.)

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B. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

I’m OK with the use of “that” here: “that was rooted” just modifies the “body of work.” You could probably argue that the words “that was” aren’t strictly necessary, but they also aren’t doing any harm at all.

The more important thing is the parallelism again: “…both in the stride-piano tradition… and Duke Ellington…”

Nope, that’s definitely not parallel, either. (B) is out.

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C. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted

Hm, no more “both”! That’s cool. Now the parallelism isn’t a problem at all: Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington are parallel to each other in the non-underlined portion.

But now there’s a more subtle problem: this thing isn’t a legitimate sentence anymore, because the presumed subject of the sentence (“Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk”) never actually “performs” a main verb. I think we can agree that the part beginning with “who” is just modifying Thelonious Monk, so let’s strip that out for just a moment to see what we have: “Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk,… yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.”

Huh? That makes no sense. Basically, the sentence is structured as a noun, followed by a modifier, followed by a dependent clause. That’s not a sentence. So (C) is out.

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D. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted

As in (C), we don’t have any parallelism issues here, since “both” has been removed. But unlike (C), (D) is actually a real sentence, since it starts with a nice, independent clause: “…Thelonious Monk produced a body of work…”

So let’s keep (D).

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E. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

And we’re right back to the same parallelism problem as in (B): “…both in the stride-piano tradition… and Duke Ellington…” That’s just plain wrong, and we’re left with (D) as the correct answer.
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02 Jan 2018, 06:19
D as i think there is no need to use both here.
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02 Jan 2018, 09:05
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B, I think. Also Tholonious typo spotted.

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02 Jan 2018, 11:20
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Tholonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in stride-piano tradition of Willi (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

(A) Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted:
USE OF 'BOTH' INCORRECT

(B) Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both:
SAME ERROR AS A

(C) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted:
NO MAIN CLAUSE

(D) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted:
CORRECT

(E) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body work rooted both:
SAME ERROR AS A
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02 Jan 2018, 11:28
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Verbal Question of The Day: Day 191: Sentence Correction

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Tholonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in stride-piano tradition of Willi (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

(A) Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted (, Rooted both is correct but in Both X and Y, X and Y is not parallel stride -piano tradition is not parallel to Duke Ellington)

(B) Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both ( Same error as explained for option A)

(C) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted (verb missing for Thelonous Monk)

(D) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted (correct S V and removal of both and addition of that with verb was)

(E) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body work rooted both ( again same error of both X and Y)

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Re: QOTD: Tholonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a  [#permalink]

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03 Jan 2018, 17:48
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B, I think. Also Tholonious typo spotted.

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05 Jul 2018, 17:17
Isn't the correct answer choice incorrectly implying that the two persons, "Jazz pianist" and "composer Thelonious Monk" produced a body of work that was rooted....?
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Isn't the correct answer choice incorrectly implying that the two persons, "Jazz pianist" and "composer Thelonious Monk" produced a body of work that was rooted....?
Well, I had the same question too and hence I chose B over D.

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Blackishmamba wrote:
Isn't the correct answer choice incorrectly implying that the two persons, "Jazz pianist" and "composer Thelonious Monk" produced a body of work that was rooted....?
Well, I had the same question too and hence I chose B over D.

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(D) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted...

"Jazz pianist" and "composer" are both describing Thelonious Monk, not two separate people. If it helps, think about whether it would make sense to say "Jazz pianist... produced a body of work..." That's a mess, right? We could say "a jazz pianist produced a body of work" or "the jazz pianist produced a body of work" -- but either way, we'd need an article for "jazz pianist" to work properly as a noun in this context.

Since "jazz pianist" can't make sense as a noun in this sentence, it must be a modifier for "Thelonious Monk." And that makes perfect sense: why would we talk about a generic "jazz pianist", but then mention a specific composer (Thelonious Monk)? And it's completely reasonable for a musician to be both a pianist and a composer.

I hope this helps!
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