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Right-brained people are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

A Right-brained people are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely. -- correct choice

B Right-brained people who are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely. -- a fragment due to the intrusion of the relative pronoun 'who'

C Occupations for right-brained people, rather than left-brained people, are the more likely to involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely. --- the more likely involve is wrong diction.

D Occupations pursued by right-brained people instead of left-brained people are more likely to involve the exercise of empathy, creative thinking, and the free expression of emotion. --' Instead of' is wrong diction; instead of means 'in the place of'

E Rather than left-brained people, occupations pursued by right-brained people are more likely to involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely. -- wrongly comparing left-brained people with occupations
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Right-brained people are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

a) Right-brained people are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

b) Right-brained people who are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

c) Occupations for right-brained people, rather than left-brained people, are the more likely to involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

d) Occupations pursued by right-brained people instead of left-brained people, are more likely to involve the exercise of empathy, creative thinking, and the free expression of emotion.

e) Rather than left-brained people, occupations pursued by right-brained people are more likely to involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

can someone Explain A and B...


I have a question.

Occupations for right-brained people, rather than for left-brained people, are more likely to involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

How about this sentence.

Is there any problem here?
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Right-brained people are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

a) Right-brained people are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

b) Right-brained people who are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

c) Occupations for right-brained people, rather than left-brained people, are the more likely to involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

d) Occupations pursued by right-brained people instead of left-brained people, are more likely to involve the exercise of empathy, creative thinking, and the free expression of emotion.

e) Rather than left-brained people, occupations pursued by right-brained people are more likely to involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

can someone Explain A and B...


I have a question.

Occupations for right-brained people, rather than for left-brained people, are more likely to involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

How about this sentence.

Is there any problem here?
I think Comparative 'more' must follow 'than'
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Right-brained people are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

a) Right-brained people are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

b) Right-brained people who are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

c) Occupations for right-brained people, rather than left-brained people, are the more likely to involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

d) Occupations pursued by right-brained people instead of left-brained people, are more likely to involve the exercise of empathy, creative thinking, and the free expression of emotion.

e) Rather than left-brained people, occupations pursued by right-brained people are more likely to involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

can someone Explain A and B...
Correct answer: (A)

Check the original sentence for Comparison errors in two areas: parallel structure and proper comparison diction. In the first part of the sentence, “X is more likely than Y to Z” is a correct structure. The second part of the sentence features a list of attributes. All three attributes are in the same form, generating appropriate parallelism. Answer (B) is a sentence fragment. Answer (C) compares “occupations” to “left-brained people,” which is not parallel. Answer (D) has a similar change to the grammatical subject of the sentence and creates wordy participial phrases in the list of attributes. Answer (E) compares “left-brained people” to “occupations” and therefore contains a misplaced modifi
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Right-brained people are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely.

a) Right-brained people are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely. - Correct choice.

b) Right-brained people who are more likely than left-brained people to pursue occupations that involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely. -- 'who' is incorrect here.

c) Occupations for right-brained people, rather than left-brained people, are the more likely to involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely. -- not concise

d) Occupations pursued by right-brained people instead of left-brained people, are more likely to involve the exercise of empathy, creative thinking, and the free expression of emotion.

e) Rather than left-brained people, occupations pursued by right-brained people are more likely to involve exercising empathy, thinking creatively, and expressing emotion freely. - Comparison error.
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